5/8/2004 c1 122Mistress Jakira
*giggles* This is funny! I wonder why it hasn't been reviewed yet...oh well, happy to be the first. :) I think it's really amusing how you incorporate all the scientific terms and stuff to describe the way you feel in a physical sense-kind of 'showing, not telling.' I think you're really talented and creative-I added you to my favorite authors and one of your poems to my favorite stories. :) Maybe then some of my readers can see your stuff, too. Great, great work! I hope you keep it up! ~MJ