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11/23/2003 c1 236mezzie
i like "the metaphor i'm reduced to" that's nice! just a note in case you didn't catch it; i think you were aiming for petals rather than pedals. but then agian, were you? hmm thought on that one.

and you are so right - the ending is killer good, absolutely wicked.
11/23/2003 c1 21Miamouse
Did you mean black 'petals' by any chance?

I like this... has a sort of desolate feeling to it. Very isolated and angsty. I can relate, I think others might be able to as well.

Mia

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