for Blue12/14/2003 c1 
20Once in a blue moon
strong images come to mind. somehow, I imagine her sitting outside the "nightwriter's" house. It's seems the appropriate place for her to be. My favourite line in the piece was "(Meaning she was just a silhouette)" I don't know, I think the parentesees added something to it, drawing it appart from the rest of the work.
nice job! yea, a topic poem! ^_^
20Once in a blue moonstrong images come to mind. somehow, I imagine her sitting outside the "nightwriter's" house. It's seems the appropriate place for her to be. My favourite line in the piece was "(Meaning she was just a silhouette)" I don't know, I think the parentesees added something to it, drawing it appart from the rest of the work.
nice job! yea, a topic poem! ^_^