for Only a Game11/26/2003 c1 
32Stormy Daye
It's a really good story but there is one problem. You said Travis couldn't feel his legs and then when Bill lifted him he felt pain from the stretched muscles. If he couldn't feel his legs then he wouldn't be able to feel that pain.
But you should continue with the story, I really liked it.
32Stormy DayeIt's a really good story but there is one problem. You said Travis couldn't feel his legs and then when Bill lifted him he felt pain from the stretched muscles. If he couldn't feel his legs then he wouldn't be able to feel that pain.
But you should continue with the story, I really liked it.