for Lightning2/25/2004 c1 
17Jane Tay
hey, thanks 4 reviewing so many of my poems:)
it was a real surprise when i got all ur reviews, i'm tellin u!
wow, i wasnt sure what i was gona get wen i picked a poem, but this is really amazing, just the power in it, every stanza like, lightning i spose!
anyway, its really good, definatly gona b checkin out sum more of ur stuff:)
thanks again 4 the whole bunch of reviewsx
17Jane Tayhey, thanks 4 reviewing so many of my poems:)
it was a real surprise when i got all ur reviews, i'm tellin u!
wow, i wasnt sure what i was gona get wen i picked a poem, but this is really amazing, just the power in it, every stanza like, lightning i spose!
anyway, its really good, definatly gona b checkin out sum more of ur stuff:)
thanks again 4 the whole bunch of reviewsx
1/16/2004 c1 3Emerald Ember
hoy...that was awesome, i like lightning, and you captured it well and truthfully, awesome, man keep developing your awesome talent (at this present moment in time i have forgotten my vocabulary, i am dumbstruck by the talent pervayed in this poem) :P :)
3Emerald Emberhoy...that was awesome, i like lightning, and you captured it well and truthfully, awesome, man keep developing your awesome talent (at this present moment in time i have forgotten my vocabulary, i am dumbstruck by the talent pervayed in this poem) :P :)
1/3/2004 c1 8rufflesia
You're good at describing lightning. You have the talent and i'm encouraging you to keep it up. May be in the future I'll see your poems in a book. :)
8rufflesiaYou're good at describing lightning. You have the talent and i'm encouraging you to keep it up. May be in the future I'll see your poems in a book. :)
12/25/2003 c1 16amethystdawn
Hmm...never thought of lightning that way. ^_^ But I must admit, it is beautiful against dark stormy background. Your poems are really good, keep up the good work!
P.S Thanks for the reviews! They're really appreciated! ^_^
16amethystdawnHmm...never thought of lightning that way. ^_^ But I must admit, it is beautiful against dark stormy background. Your poems are really good, keep up the good work!
P.S Thanks for the reviews! They're really appreciated! ^_^
12/23/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Awesome, absolutely brilliant. I loved the lines, 'Perhaps, perchance, per sudden gleam'(loved how you kept using 'per'), 'Chattering upon a stormy day', 'A streak of light, sudden daylight'(especially the secondhalf) and 'The many hue of this majestic splendour'. Great work, you kept the mystery and power all throughout the poem.
47Anjeni WindsingerAwesome, absolutely brilliant. I loved the lines, 'Perhaps, perchance, per sudden gleam'(loved how you kept using 'per'), 'Chattering upon a stormy day', 'A streak of light, sudden daylight'(especially the secondhalf) and 'The many hue of this majestic splendour'. Great work, you kept the mystery and power all throughout the poem.
12/18/2003 c1 Grey-eyed-dream-chaser
Very good poem. I love storms, especially one with lightning, even though it often destroyes the trees and animals that I love. The only type of storm I don't like is one that accompanys evil.
Very good poem. I love storms, especially one with lightning, even though it often destroyes the trees and animals that I love. The only type of storm I don't like is one that accompanys evil.
12/2/2003 c1 8KawaiiCookie
Wow! Intriguing... I love how you kept its mysteriousness the whole way through-it's absolutly magical! Great work!
8KawaiiCookieWow! Intriguing... I love how you kept its mysteriousness the whole way through-it's absolutly magical! Great work!
11/26/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
Oh! My! Gosh!
The poem was so... unbelievable! Seriously! I'm not exagerating! I read the very first lines:
"Often naught one has seen,
Perhaps, perchance, per sudden gleam,"
Litteraly, I just gasped, and said to myself: "Oh, my gosh! That is so briliant!" Truthfully! I loved it! A work of brilliance! An addition to my favs! Beautiful!
148JJR MeerrafOh! My! Gosh!
The poem was so... unbelievable! Seriously! I'm not exagerating! I read the very first lines:
"Often naught one has seen,
Perhaps, perchance, per sudden gleam,"
Litteraly, I just gasped, and said to myself: "Oh, my gosh! That is so briliant!" Truthfully! I loved it! A work of brilliance! An addition to my favs! Beautiful!
11/26/2003 c1 2Star-Gir1
Hey! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing my story! :) Your poem is wonderful, an amazing job of describing a lightning storm. :) And yes, I am going to put another chapter up, I just haven't had the time to. Anyway, keep up the amazing work, and I hope you don't mind me adding you to my Favorite Authors list. God bless!
2Star-Gir1Hey! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing my story! :) Your poem is wonderful, an amazing job of describing a lightning storm. :) And yes, I am going to put another chapter up, I just haven't had the time to. Anyway, keep up the amazing work, and I hope you don't mind me adding you to my Favorite Authors list. God bless!
11/26/2003 c1 82pippin tomson
This far from terrible. It challenges the mind amd it is wonderful to read a pem like that. They are the poems I lke, and the decripton was marvelous!
82pippin tomsonThis far from terrible. It challenges the mind amd it is wonderful to read a pem like that. They are the poems I lke, and the decripton was marvelous!
11/25/2003 c1 8Rhapsodic Melancholy
I really think your style of poetry is amazing. You create such vivid descriptions, and while they can be confusuing to puzzle out at first, once the meaning of your words dawns on me, the resulting feeling resembles a, well, a lightning bolt. I think you are a very talented poet, and especially in control of your words. Some of the lines and the organization of words in this poem reminds me somewhat of my all-time favorite god of a poet, EE Cummings. So yeah, considering that i hold him in a position almost as high as god himself, thats a huge complement.
~Melancholy~
¿questions?
PS- Melancholy is the name, and melancholic poetry is the game! lol well yeah... its just that all my writing conveys my own emotions, and i do tend to be... uhh.. melancholic.. especially when im in the poetic mood.
8Rhapsodic MelancholyI really think your style of poetry is amazing. You create such vivid descriptions, and while they can be confusuing to puzzle out at first, once the meaning of your words dawns on me, the resulting feeling resembles a, well, a lightning bolt. I think you are a very talented poet, and especially in control of your words. Some of the lines and the organization of words in this poem reminds me somewhat of my all-time favorite god of a poet, EE Cummings. So yeah, considering that i hold him in a position almost as high as god himself, thats a huge complement.
~Melancholy~
¿questions?
PS- Melancholy is the name, and melancholic poetry is the game! lol well yeah... its just that all my writing conveys my own emotions, and i do tend to be... uhh.. melancholic.. especially when im in the poetic mood.
11/25/2003 c1 57teh tarik
~Borne of empyrean's clouds~
That was just amazing! And the imagery was really vivid as well!
57teh tarik~Borne of empyrean's clouds~
That was just amazing! And the imagery was really vivid as well!
11/25/2003 c1 21Aithne Amakiir
I realy like your poem...its so beautiful. I am devoting a part of my website to poetry...may I put your work on it? I would probably just link to your work here.
21Aithne AmakiirI realy like your poem...its so beautiful. I am devoting a part of my website to poetry...may I put your work on it? I would probably just link to your work here.