for All My Love3/4/2004 c1 Kristi
Again, the excellent imagery; I love it. The obsessiveish character's voice is most interesting, as well.
Again, the excellent imagery; I love it. The obsessiveish character's voice is most interesting, as well.
12/24/2003 c1 Chasca
Gods I wish I could write as well as you! Beautiful, truly and deeply beautiful and well written. The descriptions were perfect, and you have a talent at first person. Wonderful piece of work!
Gods I wish I could write as well as you! Beautiful, truly and deeply beautiful and well written. The descriptions were perfect, and you have a talent at first person. Wonderful piece of work!
11/26/2003 c1 
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I like your use of vision in this. . . but of course it means much more than that to me. This was really sweet. . . really beautiful. Reminds me of someone I know. . . hmm. . .
2BLARGH00000009I like your use of vision in this. . . but of course it means much more than that to me. This was really sweet. . . really beautiful. Reminds me of someone I know. . . hmm. . .