
11/26/2003 c1
116Incubabe
This is great, my fave line(s) has to be:
"You are impracticality/In burning pink" - that is just an amazing image.

This is great, my fave line(s) has to be:
"You are impracticality/In burning pink" - that is just an amazing image.
11/26/2003 c1
9Sarah-Angel87
very well written, the flow is very good and it can be flexed to mean different things, but the main message is there. you did a very good job and I hope to see more from you soon.

very well written, the flow is very good and it can be flexed to mean different things, but the main message is there. you did a very good job and I hope to see more from you soon.