for A day in the life of me12/9/2003 c1 
79deepdown
hmm... havent seen an idea like this before, very original. i like it. especially the lack of pronouns, and the simple rhythm, nicely written, very good.
79deepdownhmm... havent seen an idea like this before, very original. i like it. especially the lack of pronouns, and the simple rhythm, nicely written, very good.
11/29/2003 c1 29Randirogue
I know this is depressing, but there's a bit of melancholy and boredom to it... even overriding the depressing aspect of the ending and such.
Very nicely done. I like when poems are written on such simple details as this.
Nice.
29RandirogueI know this is depressing, but there's a bit of melancholy and boredom to it... even overriding the depressing aspect of the ending and such.
Very nicely done. I like when poems are written on such simple details as this.
Nice.
11/26/2003 c1 Megan
hey, i like your poem. It is nicely written i say. i can relate to it...
hey, i like your poem. It is nicely written i say. i can relate to it...