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12/9/2003 c1 79deepdown
hmm... havent seen an idea like this before, very original. i like it. especially the lack of pronouns, and the simple rhythm, nicely written, very good.
11/29/2003 c1 29Randirogue
I know this is depressing, but there's a bit of melancholy and boredom to it... even overriding the depressing aspect of the ending and such.
Very nicely done. I like when poems are written on such simple details as this.
Nice.
11/28/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
very sad, but i think everyone has days like that
11/28/2003 c1 35Infinity Plus One
That was a good poem, well done. It's e-really sad and touching.
11/26/2003 c1 45flowerthief
Very nice.
11/26/2003 c1 Megan
hey, i like your poem. It is nicely written i say. i can relate to it...

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