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4/6/2005 c1 3Rachel Gattina
This was a good poem. I liked it.
4/1/2004 c1 19SubliminalMsgs
...wow...it was really kinda choppy...and u must really like punctuation...all those commas and periods r unnecessary...however, it was interesting seeing a diff. suicide poem...mine is not like this at all...my poems have a completely diff. style...
1/21/2004 c1 122Free-Writer
This is really good...but sad. Is this how you really feel? Maybe you should talk to someone you know about it. But the first step for fixing your problems is writing (at least for me) so keep writing!
1/12/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Wow! This is really something I've never read before. Very Nice. It's got loads of meanings hidden underneath and I think you did a nice job.
1/11/2004 c1 132lucretiabaine
hey, thanks for reveiwing my poem-ness. this is excellent, but theres a typo (sorry cuz i'm a proofreading freak xD): "At why its come to this" But who cares. we all write suicide poems, dont we. i wrote one, its called The Solution. neway, this has been a long annoying reveiw. bai! -andromeda
1/10/2004 c1 151wastedlovexxx
aww what the hell all your poems are shit because you are a shitty person who doesnt know how to be nice.You critize my work just because you can't write yourself.
12/8/2003 c1 82pippin tomson
I like the way you have set this out, very interesting.
12/3/2003 c1 25soulofblackcrow
i coudn't have said it better myself, i loved it. It really shows the feelings one has.
12/3/2003 c1 Laksha
I like the way you first stated an emotion and then sort of...explained it, eh? Anyway, I really like how it's written. You really get the point across and the severity of these emotions.Well done!
12/1/2003 c1 20Innocent Green Eyes
Pretty intense :D You're not really considering it though are ya? I wrote a suicide poem or two. They're pretty interesting huh? But this is exactly how I felt any time I ever considered it! Very nice =D
~Greeny
11/30/2003 c1 13BloodyKaleidoscope
I really like that, God it is so hard to review poems.
11/28/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. very sad.. i love the format too... very powerful awesome poem
11/27/2003 c1 44superfufu
oh cool. a simple message in such nice format. short lines are good coz they don't make your brain work much. keep writing.
11/26/2003 c1 45flowerthief
I like this. The format is awesome. Overall the poem is nicely put together.

AC
11/26/2003 c1 Megan
I loved your poem. I can relate to it kinda.

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