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12/11/2015 c9 1Worst Person
Ok I thought this was the ending, until I saw some reviews on chapter 22 or so. WHERE ARE THY REST?
10/9/2011 c9 Random
That was a random ending... I think you... gah whatever
3/19/2008 c9 1Dame Mage
This is a little random... all the same i hope you update.
3/5/2008 c9 22Kohlomere
Whoops but all's well that ends well.

Great job,

3/4/2008 c9 2Foxy Shazam
Ew. The part with Chris and Jessica makes me sick. . Oh well, I guess it could be worse, you could put tentacles into some sexual scenario. *shivers*
11/24/2007 c1 KatyLee
when a person talks, and the sentence continues, (IE "She's lying to you," Zeta said sarcastically) then you use a comma, when it stops, (IE "I like pie."

"So do I!")

You use a period because the sentence is completely stopping. Just a note. You also have a lot of grammatical errors and typos in your story. If you re-wrote this I suppose you should have paid better attention to grammar.
10/16/2007 c1 9Polka Panda Rockstar
Right after Melissa says "You have been here for over a year and yet you have not figured how not to get one kid injured at least once a day" - This picture popped into my head of some kids sitting in a circle with my old gym teacher standing at the center and saying "Okay, kids, today we're going to meditate." - and then one kid just faints. It made me laugh.

I have an odd imagination. And an awkward sense of humor.

By the way, what Melissa said was a big run-on sentence. Just thought I'd point that out.

Overall, I like this story though. It's different from anything I've read on FictionPress so far. Good work! Anyway, I'll be reading.
10/12/2007 c3 11Luv and Peace
O... More! Update soon!
10/12/2007 c2 Luv and Peace
Lol! Procrastination! I really liked the shower part. Lol.
10/7/2007 c2 1noriepie

this is a new situation

but don't u think they sound kind of childish to be 20something teachers?
10/5/2007 c1 11Luv and Peace
Hey! Awesome to see this story back and I can't wait to read this rewrite. It seems interesting, update soon!
10/5/2007 c1 Always Lost In A Book
hey can you send me the original too?

10/4/2007 c1 4R-Shindo
Lmfaoo! Could you send me the original plxx? My email address for hotmail is...

shindoxxshuichi (at) hotmail (dot) com

Thank you so much! And I totally love this story atm! :D
3/3/2007 c22 3Innocent Desires
Oh my god, how nice it's progressing! Do continue!
2/3/2007 c22 4NoLongerHereIMSORRY
Chris is probably my favorite person ever. lol. He's really funny, and I want a teacher like him... maybe. Poor Brock, I just knew something like that was going to happen. I hope you haven't given up on this story, it's really good. :D
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