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22Non-existent Puritanism
Interesting...I was thinking about the exact same thing once...You know here...when someone says Fassi...it's meant as a negative comment...calling someone gay...and I was just wondering if it stems from the fact that Fascists were hated people back then...
22Non-existent PuritanismInteresting...I was thinking about the exact same thing once...You know here...when someone says Fassi...it's meant as a negative comment...calling someone gay...and I was just wondering if it stems from the fact that Fascists were hated people back then...
3/11/2004 c15 30Roadside Dryer
Hey! That's very interesting! Glad you finally updated on something! Good job.
*Thanks for the review, i was getting kinda worried that you were mad at me for taking off Hopeless Hope.
30Roadside DryerHey! That's very interesting! Glad you finally updated on something! Good job.
*Thanks for the review, i was getting kinda worried that you were mad at me for taking off Hopeless Hope.
2/24/2004 c14 22Non-existent Puritanism
To some it does..to others not...it all depends on what ppl think of the commercial...if they're smart enough to realize what the advertisers are doing...
22Non-existent PuritanismTo some it does..to others not...it all depends on what ppl think of the commercial...if they're smart enough to realize what the advertisers are doing...
2/22/2004 c1 292Fabian Cortez
I would have to say, as a writer that has included intimate scenes in his stories; no I don't consider myself and my own personal life experiences of sex in the scenes I write. Albeit that I have children and therefore am indeed active. The answer is still no. I consider my characters and how they may react.
This is a valid and interesting question. I can understand the response you have to this.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
I have updated TORMENT2 for your enjoyment. :)
292Fabian CortezI would have to say, as a writer that has included intimate scenes in his stories; no I don't consider myself and my own personal life experiences of sex in the scenes I write. Albeit that I have children and therefore am indeed active. The answer is still no. I consider my characters and how they may react.
This is a valid and interesting question. I can understand the response you have to this.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
I have updated TORMENT2 for your enjoyment. :)
1/6/2004 c13 22Non-existent Puritanism
Yes, I have a wrestling story (on FF) that many people were very excited to hear me writing, but I haven't updated it in quite a while.
22Non-existent PuritanismYes, I have a wrestling story (on FF) that many people were very excited to hear me writing, but I haven't updated it in quite a while.
1/4/2004 c13 1Okami Hikage
Ah yesh, time. I never have enough. I think it's because whenever I'm bored, I think of a ton of things to get me..erm...UNbored, and then I want to follow through them all. So then I have a million things I have to do, but I always have something else to do and I can't do the thing I really want to do.
@.@
That's like me with my webpages. I think I have too many, but I don't want to delete any of them cuz they're so cool. Well, that's my opinion, anyhow. ^_^
-Sar
1Okami HikageAh yesh, time. I never have enough. I think it's because whenever I'm bored, I think of a ton of things to get me..erm...UNbored, and then I want to follow through them all. So then I have a million things I have to do, but I always have something else to do and I can't do the thing I really want to do.
@.@
That's like me with my webpages. I think I have too many, but I don't want to delete any of them cuz they're so cool. Well, that's my opinion, anyhow. ^_^
-Sar
1/2/2004 c14 30Roadside Dryer
Ya! Wait what? oh ya i hate that! I mean i would rater see clothing on some one real than a perfect person who looks great in it then here I come and I look horrible! Gr, i wasted money on something horrible (kels over and dies) how bad!
30Roadside DryerYa! Wait what? oh ya i hate that! I mean i would rater see clothing on some one real than a perfect person who looks great in it then here I come and I look horrible! Gr, i wasted money on something horrible (kels over and dies) how bad!
1/2/2004 c13 Roadside Dryer
Nope, i have no feeling like that-middle school rules!-well seventh grade does atleast! OOps! Was i suppose to tell you that? After what you have read, oops! Forgive me. Wew, i thought that after you read more of hopeless hope i thought you were going to be like "your a total sicko!" Hey, i had to make it interesting-i mean how interesting would it be if they spent to night in the woods with nothing happen? And with drugs! Weh-this has made me feel a ton better, i hate neopets!
Nope, i have no feeling like that-middle school rules!-well seventh grade does atleast! OOps! Was i suppose to tell you that? After what you have read, oops! Forgive me. Wew, i thought that after you read more of hopeless hope i thought you were going to be like "your a total sicko!" Hey, i had to make it interesting-i mean how interesting would it be if they spent to night in the woods with nothing happen? And with drugs! Weh-this has made me feel a ton better, i hate neopets!
1/1/2004 c14 Carolina.Scribe
Good points, both of them. Comercial advertistment does get old. Have you noticed that a standard commercial break use to only last five minutes but now last up to fifteen?
Makes you think doesn't it? Makes you wonder what so special about all that crap their trying to sell you. It irritates the be-Jesus out of my mom. She can't stand commercial breaks...
Oh well, sorry for rambling myself, must be all these hours by myself at home, I really need to get a job. LOL
Love ya, and thanks for all the wonderful reviews,
Jessica White
Good points, both of them. Comercial advertistment does get old. Have you noticed that a standard commercial break use to only last five minutes but now last up to fifteen?
Makes you think doesn't it? Makes you wonder what so special about all that crap their trying to sell you. It irritates the be-Jesus out of my mom. She can't stand commercial breaks...
Oh well, sorry for rambling myself, must be all these hours by myself at home, I really need to get a job. LOL
Love ya, and thanks for all the wonderful reviews,
Jessica White
1/1/2004 c13 Carolina.Scribe
YEA! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! WHOOHOO!
Sorry, had to get that out of my system, ^_-
I have to agree with you on this one, I looked back at one of my stories and found out that I hadn't updated it since Dec. 5th!
Once we get caught up in our day to day life, it seems that our stories kind of suffer some neglect, yes?
Anyway, I'm very glad you updated, and I'm now on my way to Chapter 14. WHOO HOO!
YEA! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! WHOOHOO!
Sorry, had to get that out of my system, ^_-
I have to agree with you on this one, I looked back at one of my stories and found out that I hadn't updated it since Dec. 5th!
Once we get caught up in our day to day life, it seems that our stories kind of suffer some neglect, yes?
Anyway, I'm very glad you updated, and I'm now on my way to Chapter 14. WHOO HOO!
12/7/2003 c12 11mrs.shigwa.cobain
Oh it looks so stupid when people try to substitute the letter u for the word you and other such things. What will be left for our generation of writers? Huh? Tell me! I don't get it! N-e-1? (heh, that last part was a joke, don't get mad at me!)
11mrs.shigwa.cobainOh it looks so stupid when people try to substitute the letter u for the word you and other such things. What will be left for our generation of writers? Huh? Tell me! I don't get it! N-e-1? (heh, that last part was a joke, don't get mad at me!)
12/7/2003 c11 mrs.shigwa.cobain
OMG, yes! Sometimes I really don't like happens in my stories. Often I feel like I'm not actually writing the story, rather that its already happened and it just comes out through me. Its a strange feeling because sometimes I want to change what happens, but I feel sort of guilty, as if I'm lying about what happened.
OMG, yes! Sometimes I really don't like happens in my stories. Often I feel like I'm not actually writing the story, rather that its already happened and it just comes out through me. Its a strange feeling because sometimes I want to change what happens, but I feel sort of guilty, as if I'm lying about what happened.
12/7/2003 c10 mrs.shigwa.cobain
Ah yes, this topic produced a few of my poems... its terrible when you've had a bad day and you get to relax but good ol' dad comes in and says, "have you done any chores today?" I especially like the way he can come in and say two words and ruin a perfectly good day. sigh I've got a quilt thing that I sew another piece to everytime he makes me mad (yeah, I use a pointy needle!). Well, its a pretty big quilt now. But, you can never really hate them... really, its illegal, and I hate that part. (ok, that was a joke. insert laugh here)
Ah yes, this topic produced a few of my poems... its terrible when you've had a bad day and you get to relax but good ol' dad comes in and says, "have you done any chores today?" I especially like the way he can come in and say two words and ruin a perfectly good day. sigh I've got a quilt thing that I sew another piece to everytime he makes me mad (yeah, I use a pointy needle!). Well, its a pretty big quilt now. But, you can never really hate them... really, its illegal, and I hate that part. (ok, that was a joke. insert laugh here)
12/7/2003 c9 mrs.shigwa.cobain
My opinion is that English teachers purposely pick books that are terrible! Actually, what happens to me is that I am prejudiced against the book simply because the teacher picked it and end up really hating it. I dunno, work always seems less like work if you want to do it, independent study is awesome.
My opinion is that English teachers purposely pick books that are terrible! Actually, what happens to me is that I am prejudiced against the book simply because the teacher picked it and end up really hating it. I dunno, work always seems less like work if you want to do it, independent study is awesome.
12/7/2003 c5 mrs.shigwa.cobain
Yeah, music often helps because it's something meaningful that someone wrote before you (if you're listening to the good kind of music, not crappy pop) And I LOVE Garbage and Alice in Chains (and Mad Season too-Layne's other band). sigh I actually had a dream recently that Layne was alive, and Kurt Cobain...well, needless to say it was a GOOD dream!
Yeah, music often helps because it's something meaningful that someone wrote before you (if you're listening to the good kind of music, not crappy pop) And I LOVE Garbage and Alice in Chains (and Mad Season too-Layne's other band). sigh I actually had a dream recently that Layne was alive, and Kurt Cobain...well, needless to say it was a GOOD dream!