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11/16/2005 c5 1CrystalBallerina
wow, I really loved this one!It was so real and really brought back some vivid memories. Thanks for a great read!
10/9/2005 c4 6Nobody-n-Particular
Saddening, tragic.
9/19/2005 c4 4KristyASoroka
Nicely written. ^_^
9/19/2005 c3 KristyASoroka
I love your work, sad but wonderfully written.
9/19/2005 c2 KristyASoroka
excellent rythem,I enjoyed reading this.
9/19/2005 c1 KristyASoroka
beautifully written, but sad.
2/5/2005 c3 And she was left alone
all those poems are really good. I have to say, i really think that u should keep writing them, really good job!
1/24/2005 c1 selene909
riviting
11/6/2004 c3 2Saggitaire
Wow. Where do you get the inspiration for all these poems? It was amazing! write some more soon! ^_^
8/25/2004 c2 Karma Police
Wow, really amazing poem. Made me pause after I read, which means it really was good. Very nice. :)
8/25/2004 c2 30a e i o u and sometimes y
This was beautiful. You've got such an amazing style.
Hey, do you think sometime you might check out my stuff? *batters eyelashes*
8/25/2004 c2 2Saggitaire
That was brillint. You're really good at poetry. ^_^
8/5/2004 c1 2epephany
a compelling poem. I feel kinda sad n angry now :) it's touching but...provocative at the same time.. evocative ADN provocative. Anyway, put some others out there, I think they'll do well- u hav a unique style
5/4/2004 c1 sharwee
hey i love it, it's very fitting for many situations! anyway you're awesome keep writting!
1/19/2004 c1 16whatica
this is really nice. and VERY TRUE. it makes sense to me! i love it! just one thing. if you are going to make a ryming poem, i suggest that you make the entire thing ryme. ( is that how you spell it? lol sorry cant spell) i noticed a few lines rymed but other than that it was free. it also had a very nice poetic rythem ( GAH NEED TO LEARN HOW TO SPELL CORRECTLY!) anywho. i liked it.
-whatica
ps: this review didn't make any sense did it?

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