for Monopoly Game of Death6/28/2004 c2 
2Earth Dancer
Thank you so much for reveiwing my story. I like this story so far, it's a very original topic. 9/10 as a rating so far.
P.S: Could you please read my other story, "Sky and Vine"? it's a little low on reveiws and judging by your descriptive poem (great job on that by the way) you'll reveiw it.
-The Tears of Falcon
2Earth DancerThank you so much for reveiwing my story. I like this story so far, it's a very original topic. 9/10 as a rating so far.
P.S: Could you please read my other story, "Sky and Vine"? it's a little low on reveiws and judging by your descriptive poem (great job on that by the way) you'll reveiw it.
-The Tears of Falcon
6/23/2004 c2 10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Ah, glad you liked the update. Now on to your review (which I've been meaning to do for quite awhile now, it's just annoying that I hardly get any time to surf the web anymore).
Got another couple of great lines in here.
"Woah! A talking car!" Why do I get the feeling Aaron isn't exactly the brightest of guys?
Pretty good still, the only thing I'd say you might want to improve is to throw a couple more details here and there. Just to add a little bit to the picture of what you want the readers to see. Otherwise, me likey.
Keep it up!
10DrunkenMonkeyKingAh, glad you liked the update. Now on to your review (which I've been meaning to do for quite awhile now, it's just annoying that I hardly get any time to surf the web anymore).
Got another couple of great lines in here.
"Woah! A talking car!" Why do I get the feeling Aaron isn't exactly the brightest of guys?
Pretty good still, the only thing I'd say you might want to improve is to throw a couple more details here and there. Just to add a little bit to the picture of what you want the readers to see. Otherwise, me likey.
Keep it up!
6/22/2004 c4 5Procyon Lotor
Hey! Great chapter, keep it up, got to run, bye! ^_^
_Monty
PS, BTW I'm working on An Air of Mystery again...in case you might like to know. ^_^
5Procyon LotorHey! Great chapter, keep it up, got to run, bye! ^_^
_Monty
PS, BTW I'm working on An Air of Mystery again...in case you might like to know. ^_^
6/3/2004 c1 Ze DrunkenMonkeyKing
Hey thanks for some more reviews, I always love to get 'em! Hmm... and evil game of Monopoly? Why do I have a feeling that I know what that's like? (Probably because I lose that game everytime I ever work up the nerves and patience to play. Damn spawn of Satans... I have no doubt they were the ones to create that game).
So far it's not as funny as your other stuff though I did like the parts in parentheses (after all, who hasn't had to deal with someone that thought they were so much cooler than you, am I right?) But keep it up, I'm definitely going to keep reading.
And by the way, thanks again for the reviews!
Hey thanks for some more reviews, I always love to get 'em! Hmm... and evil game of Monopoly? Why do I have a feeling that I know what that's like? (Probably because I lose that game everytime I ever work up the nerves and patience to play. Damn spawn of Satans... I have no doubt they were the ones to create that game).
So far it's not as funny as your other stuff though I did like the parts in parentheses (after all, who hasn't had to deal with someone that thought they were so much cooler than you, am I right?) But keep it up, I'm definitely going to keep reading.
And by the way, thanks again for the reviews!
5/24/2004 c4 9Neon Tetra
I read the whole thing in one sitting, smiling nearly all the way through. Good job. I'm definitely going to watch for updates on this one.
9Neon TetraI read the whole thing in one sitting, smiling nearly all the way through. Good job. I'm definitely going to watch for updates on this one.
5/21/2004 c2 Cloud Strife Final Fantasy Addict
I love this story. PLEASE keep writing it!
Peace out
I love this story. PLEASE keep writing it!
Peace out
5/20/2004 c4 Toriel
Wow, this is pretty good. Weird and mysterious, in a funny way. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing!
Wow, this is pretty good. Weird and mysterious, in a funny way. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing!
5/20/2004 c4 108Kirona of the skies
V. good. But the lack of anything significant happening in the chapters is really starting to bug me. Write something action-packed already! ^_~
108Kirona of the skiesV. good. But the lack of anything significant happening in the chapters is really starting to bug me. Write something action-packed already! ^_~
5/20/2004 c4 1Genius-Ben
Well it is certainly very interesting. Was that supposed to be the end or is there more?
The only thing I would like to point out at this time, is that perhaps instead of so thoroughly describing everyone's characters at the begining you should just let their personalities display themselves throughout the story.
~The Benster
1Genius-BenWell it is certainly very interesting. Was that supposed to be the end or is there more?
The only thing I would like to point out at this time, is that perhaps instead of so thoroughly describing everyone's characters at the begining you should just let their personalities display themselves throughout the story.
~The Benster
5/10/2004 c3 27Proh Crepitus
I don't remember if I reviewed this story soo... here! This is just to funny, you know that? Where DID you get this idea? Anyway, chapter 2 is up, just sos ya know. Bye!
27Proh CrepitusI don't remember if I reviewed this story soo... here! This is just to funny, you know that? Where DID you get this idea? Anyway, chapter 2 is up, just sos ya know. Bye!
5/2/2004 c3 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
Hmm. Your chapter titles . . . Have you ever read the "Enchanted Forest Chronicles"? Otherwise, great! I liekd it. WRITE MORE o.O;
148Moroni of the Mount of RoHmm. Your chapter titles . . . Have you ever read the "Enchanted Forest Chronicles"? Otherwise, great! I liekd it. WRITE MORE o.O;
4/3/2004 c3 108Kirona of the skies
LoL! I finally got around to reading the other chapters, and katie, though I already have said it many times before...YOU ARE BRILLIANT!
108Kirona of the skiesLoL! I finally got around to reading the other chapters, and katie, though I already have said it many times before...YOU ARE BRILLIANT!
3/25/2004 c3 3pisces4life
Is it done? I hope not, either way u havent updated since Feb.! CONTINUE! pwease?
3pisces4lifeIs it done? I hope not, either way u havent updated since Feb.! CONTINUE! pwease?
3/21/2004 c3 Libby-Lou
u_u; it's not done? or IS it done? ::confused:: I like it, in any case. Why is Uncle Pennybags always shouting? It has to be hard on the lungs... anyway, gotsta go! See ya! Hugs and Kisses, Libby Lou
u_u; it's not done? or IS it done? ::confused:: I like it, in any case. Why is Uncle Pennybags always shouting? It has to be hard on the lungs... anyway, gotsta go! See ya! Hugs and Kisses, Libby Lou
2/25/2004 c3 5Procyon Lotor
Omg! Lmao! "Yup, that's right. An inanimate object just flipped me off." Classic touch! And you know, I've yet to find a writer that can write a story from a car's point of view quite as well as you can. ^_^ Quite nice! Write more or SORTA DIE!
-Monty
5Procyon LotorOmg! Lmao! "Yup, that's right. An inanimate object just flipped me off." Classic touch! And you know, I've yet to find a writer that can write a story from a car's point of view quite as well as you can. ^_^ Quite nice! Write more or SORTA DIE!
-Monty