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12/8/2003 c1 ABS89
Very interestingly good.
12/6/2003 c1 Mina Carlisle
Very good, but it is sad. But hey, you've got talent and I've noticed you're becoming an FP.com junkie like myself.
11/29/2003 c1 74Etheral
Quite dark. Quite disturbing imagery. Insightful and descriptive. It's really good!
Great job!
Alyssha
11/29/2003 c1 71Spider
Very dark, indeed. The first few lines sounded like the story of a fallen angel, very disturbing imagery.
11/29/2003 c1 251LegendaryPunk29
Very nice poem. Well written. I liked the idea of wat ur talkin bout?
11/29/2003 c1 106Blitzedout
Wow is all i can say. So depressing, but really good. Keep it up!
11/29/2003 c1 Mikala2
Wow! very insightful and descriptive. I really liked the beginning and the metaphor with the wings... very cool. I really liked the dark and angsty mood it took on right from the beginning. I liked the end about people not hearing the cries of others and of you personally. I thought that was very inightful and well expressed. Great Job.
11/29/2003 c1 33charcoal wings
omg so sad! very very good. love it. especially the thing about the 12 year old. ^^=

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