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4/30/2021 c1 marshamello898
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
6/4/2012 c8 LaughingLlama
It moves a little fast, but it can become a really great story if it moves slower and it wouldnt hurt to add a little detail, like the characters' appearance. I enjoyed reading the story though!
4/8/2008 c5 7Belle Femme
"Maybe we can bribe a whore or something to keep him company while we escape."

I love that line...its hysterical. I love western pieces and this certainly captures your attention
2/7/2008 c1 MeiLeeCalifornia
Helo! So sorry, I've been busy, but I finally got to read & review! Very interesting start, lots of action :D Look forward to reading more!
1/11/2004 c8 5aqua-angel
AWESOME ENDING! :) I'm glad Jesse and Cassie got married, and now i kno why Jesse doesn't like he's father. I can't wait to read the story based in New Zealand that you have in stored for us, I bet it'll be pretty exciting. I was going to do a story that was based in Thailand (I'm thai) but then i gave up on the idea and decided on New York :/ anyways, good luck with the new story!
1/8/2004 c6 aqua-angel
*gasp* the horror! er... whose James Maloney? OH YAH, sorry brainfreeze. Wow, why did Jesse want his father dead? Seems kinda suspicious... the beginning was actually pretty cute. Unpredictable turnabout I thought, i can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon! :)
1/5/2004 c4 3AmberEye
well this is a pretty good story but I think you shouldn't put in so many author's notes they're sorta annoying. but it's a pretty good start and I hope to read more soon
1/1/2004 c5 5aqua-angel
hehe they kissed! great chappie, i'm glad that she got caught up with her best friend. *sniff* it is sad about her brother though... *sigh* hope they catch the guy behind it all soon. Update soon!
12/30/2003 c4 5ephemeral olive
Hey...first of all, this story was very well written and original. secondly, in response to your review of "Molly", I would never do what "molly" did...my boyfriend will make it up to me..:-D somehow. glad yours treats you right, too. Thanks for R/R ing my story.
12/26/2003 c4 5aqua-angel
XD I got confused cuz well i dunno. I was curious on what happened at the dinner party b/c it wasn't mentioned in the beginning and then i went back to chappie 3 and it just seems new to me O.O did u edit or am i losing my mind? hm... must be the latter. Anyways i noticed you DID combine the ideas as you said u would... however i can't find where u said that. or maybe u did. Gah, too confused anyways, i'm glad ur writer's block is gone. update soon! Laterz and MERRY XMAS!
12/23/2003 c1 1Dylan Wiles
It's Jesse James isn't it? Cool!Ill read on
12/23/2003 c4 Dylan Wiles
really good stuff. I like your charactures and your words flow nicely.Good story.
Check out my story on this thread It's called KID. R&R I'll put you on my authors list.
12/22/2003 c1 31Blood-Rose-36502
That's a great story. Did you continue it else where? I will look and see ^_^ It's very interesting. And my dad is a western freak, so odd, but true, I like them too. ^_^ Hehhe. Great job. !
12/14/2003 c3 sleep all night rock all day
cool! update soon! and thanks for reviewing my story
12/9/2003 c3 5aqua-angel
*pouts* so short! I wonder what you're gonna do now... dangit, i can't believe jesse would just leave her there when he knows that she said his father may be the murderer! tsk... neways update soon!
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