for Hunter Becomes the Hunted4/30/2021 c1 marshamello898
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
6/4/2012 c8 LaughingLlama
It moves a little fast, but it can become a really great story if it moves slower and it wouldnt hurt to add a little detail, like the characters' appearance. I enjoyed reading the story though!
It moves a little fast, but it can become a really great story if it moves slower and it wouldnt hurt to add a little detail, like the characters' appearance. I enjoyed reading the story though!
4/8/2008 c5 
7Belle Femme
"Maybe we can bribe a whore or something to keep him company while we escape."
I love that line...its hysterical. I love western pieces and this certainly captures your attention
7Belle Femme"Maybe we can bribe a whore or something to keep him company while we escape."
I love that line...its hysterical. I love western pieces and this certainly captures your attention
2/7/2008 c1 MeiLeeCalifornia
Helo! So sorry, I've been busy, but I finally got to read & review! Very interesting start, lots of action :D Look forward to reading more!
Helo! So sorry, I've been busy, but I finally got to read & review! Very interesting start, lots of action :D Look forward to reading more!
1/11/2004 c8 5aqua-angel
AWESOME ENDING! :) I'm glad Jesse and Cassie got married, and now i kno why Jesse doesn't like he's father. I can't wait to read the story based in New Zealand that you have in stored for us, I bet it'll be pretty exciting. I was going to do a story that was based in Thailand (I'm thai) but then i gave up on the idea and decided on New York :/ anyways, good luck with the new story!
5aqua-angelAWESOME ENDING! :) I'm glad Jesse and Cassie got married, and now i kno why Jesse doesn't like he's father. I can't wait to read the story based in New Zealand that you have in stored for us, I bet it'll be pretty exciting. I was going to do a story that was based in Thailand (I'm thai) but then i gave up on the idea and decided on New York :/ anyways, good luck with the new story!
1/8/2004 c6 aqua-angel
*gasp* the horror! er... whose James Maloney? OH YAH, sorry brainfreeze. Wow, why did Jesse want his father dead? Seems kinda suspicious... the beginning was actually pretty cute. Unpredictable turnabout I thought, i can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon! :)
*gasp* the horror! er... whose James Maloney? OH YAH, sorry brainfreeze. Wow, why did Jesse want his father dead? Seems kinda suspicious... the beginning was actually pretty cute. Unpredictable turnabout I thought, i can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon! :)
1/5/2004 c4 3AmberEye
well this is a pretty good story but I think you shouldn't put in so many author's notes they're sorta annoying. but it's a pretty good start and I hope to read more soon
3AmberEyewell this is a pretty good story but I think you shouldn't put in so many author's notes they're sorta annoying. but it's a pretty good start and I hope to read more soon
1/1/2004 c5 5aqua-angel
hehe they kissed! great chappie, i'm glad that she got caught up with her best friend. *sniff* it is sad about her brother though... *sigh* hope they catch the guy behind it all soon. Update soon!
5aqua-angelhehe they kissed! great chappie, i'm glad that she got caught up with her best friend. *sniff* it is sad about her brother though... *sigh* hope they catch the guy behind it all soon. Update soon!
12/30/2003 c4 5ephemeral olive
Hey...first of all, this story was very well written and original. secondly, in response to your review of "Molly", I would never do what "molly" did...my boyfriend will make it up to me..:-D somehow. glad yours treats you right, too. Thanks for R/R ing my story.
~Alixandra
5ephemeral oliveHey...first of all, this story was very well written and original. secondly, in response to your review of "Molly", I would never do what "molly" did...my boyfriend will make it up to me..:-D somehow. glad yours treats you right, too. Thanks for R/R ing my story.
~Alixandra
12/26/2003 c4 5aqua-angel
XD I got confused cuz well i dunno. I was curious on what happened at the dinner party b/c it wasn't mentioned in the beginning and then i went back to chappie 3 and it just seems new to me O.O did u edit or am i losing my mind? hm... must be the latter. Anyways i noticed you DID combine the ideas as you said u would... however i can't find where u said that. or maybe u did. Gah, too confused anyways, i'm glad ur writer's block is gone. update soon! Laterz and MERRY XMAS!
5aqua-angelXD I got confused cuz well i dunno. I was curious on what happened at the dinner party b/c it wasn't mentioned in the beginning and then i went back to chappie 3 and it just seems new to me O.O did u edit or am i losing my mind? hm... must be the latter. Anyways i noticed you DID combine the ideas as you said u would... however i can't find where u said that. or maybe u did. Gah, too confused anyways, i'm glad ur writer's block is gone. update soon! Laterz and MERRY XMAS!
12/23/2003 c4 Dylan Wiles
really good stuff. I like your charactures and your words flow nicely.Good story.
Check out my story on this thread It's called KID. R&R I'll put you on my authors list.
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really good stuff. I like your charactures and your words flow nicely.Good story.
Check out my story on this thread It's called KID. R&R I'll put you on my authors list.
D
12/22/2003 c1 31Blood-Rose-36502
That's a great story. Did you continue it else where? I will look and see ^_^ It's very interesting. And my dad is a western freak, so odd, but true, I like them too. ^_^ Hehhe. Great job. !
31Blood-Rose-36502That's a great story. Did you continue it else where? I will look and see ^_^ It's very interesting. And my dad is a western freak, so odd, but true, I like them too. ^_^ Hehhe. Great job. !
12/9/2003 c3 5aqua-angel
*pouts* so short! I wonder what you're gonna do now... dangit, i can't believe jesse would just leave her there when he knows that she said his father may be the murderer! tsk... neways update soon!
5aqua-angel*pouts* so short! I wonder what you're gonna do now... dangit, i can't believe jesse would just leave her there when he knows that she said his father may be the murderer! tsk... neways update soon!