11/30/2003 c1 kristina toffland
great job! I'm lookign forward to more! please keep up the great work! update soon!
kris
great job! I'm lookign forward to more! please keep up the great work! update soon!
kris
11/30/2003 c1 3booklover114
hey this is a great story you have real talent. I can't wait to see what happens next its going to be good I can tell.
hey this is a great story you have real talent. I can't wait to see what happens next its going to be good I can tell.
11/30/2003 c1 fearphobic
sorry, um this isn't exactly a review, but answer to ur question, i'm gonna be 16 in jan.
and yeah do update soon.
sorry, um this isn't exactly a review, but answer to ur question, i'm gonna be 16 in jan.
and yeah do update soon.
11/30/2003 c1 16StarsOverWonderland
i like it, you use dialogue well. and Tom seems super sweet.
good job
i like it, you use dialogue well. and Tom seems super sweet.
good job
11/30/2003 c1 24fearphobic
hey, i like the start of the story. sounds interesting, makes u realize how some guys like Kris's bf r just plain sick. can't wait till u update!
hey, i like the start of the story. sounds interesting, makes u realize how some guys like Kris's bf r just plain sick. can't wait till u update!