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for The bitter person that is me

2/9/2004 c1 Winter's Roar
An honest poem that i think most people can relate to. I have a question though, in the second line of the second stanza did you mean "thats the way from now on" or did you mean to end with just now? Anyways, love this poem, love it. It's blunt and seems to have hidden emotions. The tone is emotionless but within the words we sense a longing for change from the constant bitterness. Interesting and well written!
~ winter
1/11/2004 c1 29aode
These are the things that I usually put in my poems. Nice one, though. Better than mine. Good work, and keep writing.
1/10/2004 c1 151wastedlovexxx
this poem is shit
12/2/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
I cant really relate... but i love the last stanza
12/1/2003 c1 44superfufu
bitterness bites the skin, the pain is sweet. mercy is a lie. to forget is a choice.

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