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4/14/2004 c1 79CrimsonCat
Theres so much emotion in this one, but I can't seem to name one. It's almost a whirlwind. Each stanza could stand quite well on its own, but together they create something... something strong. Something unbreakable. I wonder if that will make sense to anyone but me.
The second stanza is my fav.
11/30/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Yep, small things usually matter the most, so it would make sense that they would cause the most harm.. Great write, this one, I like it a lot. Keep writing..
11/30/2003 c1 34Minkeoto
Good, but it would help if it were longer.
11/30/2003 c1 83MiriamP
I really enjoyed it. I liked how you used both endings and beginnings ( "no endings" and "you start")

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