for Qualities2/26/2007 c1 
3Fan Fan
Wow, this one is a quality work :) The expressiveness, emotional actions, and tantalizing words almost conceals the underlying work of rhyming and letter tweaking :) Good work!
3Fan FanWow, this one is a quality work :) The expressiveness, emotional actions, and tantalizing words almost conceals the underlying work of rhyming and letter tweaking :) Good work!
5/8/2004 c1 122Mistress Jakira
;_; Oh, that's sweet. I feel like kind of an unemotional girlfriend because I don't really write poetry for my guy...but it's because most of my poetry has been written out of sadness, and he makes me happy! I appreciate the talent in you for writing about your happiness-I have always been inclined to be content rather than happy, and contentness is not very exciting at all.
I like this; in a technical sense, it's got a logical progression of ideas, and in a human sense, it expresses a lot of feeling and really means what it says. I REALLY like your stuff so far! ~MJ
122Mistress Jakira;_; Oh, that's sweet. I feel like kind of an unemotional girlfriend because I don't really write poetry for my guy...but it's because most of my poetry has been written out of sadness, and he makes me happy! I appreciate the talent in you for writing about your happiness-I have always been inclined to be content rather than happy, and contentness is not very exciting at all.
I like this; in a technical sense, it's got a logical progression of ideas, and in a human sense, it expresses a lot of feeling and really means what it says. I REALLY like your stuff so far! ~MJ