for The Angel Bob10/6/2005 c1 MattHolck
sounds like a charcter origin
sounds like a charcter origin
11/24/2004 c8 ricster 2000
hay will this is very goote i can help u with a finish i will see u on dec3 tell then klemmy ricster20 says enjoylife & screw all who belive they can tell you how 2 run it u r a great poet& great poets =great friends&thinkers
hay will this is very goote i can help u with a finish i will see u on dec3 tell then klemmy ricster20 says enjoylife & screw all who belive they can tell you how 2 run it u r a great poet& great poets =great friends&thinkers
3/14/2004 c1 Richard Dean
From Richard Dean: I look forward to the next chapters of Bob's story. I'm anxious to see what direction you take this in. Keep up the good work!
From Richard Dean: I look forward to the next chapters of Bob's story. I'm anxious to see what direction you take this in. Keep up the good work!
12/14/2003 c5 
86The Fenix
I really liked chapter 4, From what I have gathered Bob no longer wants to be on earth, so him gaining mortality would allow him to did so why is he not jumping at it? Guess we will find out!
86The FenixI really liked chapter 4, From what I have gathered Bob no longer wants to be on earth, so him gaining mortality would allow him to did so why is he not jumping at it? Guess we will find out!
12/12/2003 c5 8Tasha Bean
lol..i like your authors note! anywayz...to the story. it's very interesting...i'm looking forward to more.
8Tasha Beanlol..i like your authors note! anywayz...to the story. it's very interesting...i'm looking forward to more.
12/5/2003 c3 86The Fenix
Loved chapter 2, very funny but with that slight twist.
As for Vivian and Bob,
The two of them going back to being lover after thousands of years sounds so disney and I really hate happy love stories. On the flip side having her in love with somebody else is much more likly but then it kinda feels like the movie cast away that she still loves bob but is in love with another.
But either way I know you will add you own personal touch.
86The FenixLoved chapter 2, very funny but with that slight twist.
As for Vivian and Bob,
The two of them going back to being lover after thousands of years sounds so disney and I really hate happy love stories. On the flip side having her in love with somebody else is much more likly but then it kinda feels like the movie cast away that she still loves bob but is in love with another.
But either way I know you will add you own personal touch.
12/3/2003 c3 Teea
okay.just my opinion cuz i'm a hopeless romantic, but i think they should still be in love with each other...it's good..i can't wait for more :)
okay.just my opinion cuz i'm a hopeless romantic, but i think they should still be in love with each other...it's good..i can't wait for more :)
12/3/2003 c2 Teea
hm..interesting..gonna read more
hm..interesting..gonna read more
12/2/2003 c1 Teea
hm...it's interesting...i'm curious to read more..
hm...it's interesting...i'm curious to read more..
12/2/2003 c1 The Fenix
I really liked the story, Love how you made a tie in with dogma in a round about way with Nazral, I disagree with the other review I like the shorted name Bob for your angel, i think it keeps the nature of the character grounded. It almost kinda makes it seem as if "Bob" could be any body that you would meet on the street. I also think most of us know how it is to lose a significant other and never fully recover because of that loss, almost as if a part of your own heart and soul is forever lost.
Great start, cant wait to read more.
Sorry bout the review being so long.
I really liked the story, Love how you made a tie in with dogma in a round about way with Nazral, I disagree with the other review I like the shorted name Bob for your angel, i think it keeps the nature of the character grounded. It almost kinda makes it seem as if "Bob" could be any body that you would meet on the street. I also think most of us know how it is to lose a significant other and never fully recover because of that loss, almost as if a part of your own heart and soul is forever lost.
Great start, cant wait to read more.
Sorry bout the review being so long.
12/1/2003 c1 1pAsTeLpRaNcEr
hm...VERY good story. I have only one criticism: is there a way you can change Bob's name? Sometimes, in a good story like this, a name that doesn't fit can ruin the mood of the story, but other than that, PERFECT! If you have time, please r & r some of my work. THANX! ^_^!
1pAsTeLpRaNcErhm...VERY good story. I have only one criticism: is there a way you can change Bob's name? Sometimes, in a good story like this, a name that doesn't fit can ruin the mood of the story, but other than that, PERFECT! If you have time, please r & r some of my work. THANX! ^_^!