for Eternal1/3/2004 c1 No Longer Posting Here
There is some room for improvement- especially towards the end. But overall it was a very well written poem.
There is some room for improvement- especially towards the end. But overall it was a very well written poem.
12/8/2003 c1 
25White-Mage-Of-Death
I know I am submitting a review of my own story, but I'm bored and I love this poem!
25White-Mage-Of-DeathI know I am submitting a review of my own story, but I'm bored and I love this poem!