for Characters for Legend of Chaos1/10/2004 c1 
26Shimagami
Sounds interesting! I like the way you actually got up something for your book unlike me who tells poeple that I will put my book up but never gets around to doing so.
Your characters sound interesting and the bio's are descriptive (though if not a little short lived)
Try making them longer so readers can get a feel for what your writing. It also might be a good Idea to get a story summery up.
For no reason at all do you have to take my advise seriously on the account that I don't listen to myself either.
~Shimagami~
^_^
26ShimagamiSounds interesting! I like the way you actually got up something for your book unlike me who tells poeple that I will put my book up but never gets around to doing so.
Your characters sound interesting and the bio's are descriptive (though if not a little short lived)
Try making them longer so readers can get a feel for what your writing. It also might be a good Idea to get a story summery up.
For no reason at all do you have to take my advise seriously on the account that I don't listen to myself either.
~Shimagami~
^_^