for Me4/30/2004 c1 mi5s simplicity
i like this. reminds me of one of my days. i love the ending. break free, that can be hard to do -.-
i like this. reminds me of one of my days. i love the ending. break free, that can be hard to do -.-
3/9/2004 c1 coco
thanks for the review!and i must say you are one of the only peeps to get me to read a whole poem!but you have a way to make your readers feel like they are the one writing the poem!keep writing cuz reading is the only thing that keeps me sane some days!later
thanks for the review!and i must say you are one of the only peeps to get me to read a whole poem!but you have a way to make your readers feel like they are the one writing the poem!keep writing cuz reading is the only thing that keeps me sane some days!later
1/7/2004 c1 laura
how very cheerful! good but sad v.v.v. sad, i'd h8 2 feel like that.
how very cheerful! good but sad v.v.v. sad, i'd h8 2 feel like that.
12/9/2003 c1 kim
nowt like being happy is there? smile! good but a bit morbid! haha
nowt like being happy is there? smile! good but a bit morbid! haha
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