for Numb1/3/2004 c1 No Longer Posting Here
The "speak" in this poem should be "speaking" to make it gramatically correct, and the way you severed the sentences in half can get old if you do it too often- so I wouldn't do that all that much in all of your poems. And sorry if I am offending you with my reviews, but I am just correcting what I see is wrong so you can grow more as a writer.
The "speak" in this poem should be "speaking" to make it gramatically correct, and the way you severed the sentences in half can get old if you do it too often- so I wouldn't do that all that much in all of your poems. And sorry if I am offending you with my reviews, but I am just correcting what I see is wrong so you can grow more as a writer.
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