for The Maiden12/30/2003 c1 
8glitterjewele
oh-so-lovely. loved each and every one of the comparisons in the first two stanzas, and great repetition in the last one with "the voice that" it worked well. last line was a great ending. good work. :)
8glitterjeweleoh-so-lovely. loved each and every one of the comparisons in the first two stanzas, and great repetition in the last one with "the voice that" it worked well. last line was a great ending. good work. :)
12/2/2003 c1 1Master Loki
LIke it. The way you describe it. ^_~ I don't know but I just have a thing when people describe things in poems. Keep writing.
1Master LokiLIke it. The way you describe it. ^_~ I don't know but I just have a thing when people describe things in poems. Keep writing.