for Angel Prayer12/5/2003 c1 
6MrFlames
Angels high above us watching our lives
-Perhaps "Angels high above watch our lives
We pray for an angel to hold us up
All through the day and the night
-that sounds awkward
Love & protect us through all weather
We thank you for this clear light
-You should focus less on rhyming, more on flow
6MrFlamesAngels high above us watching our lives
-Perhaps "Angels high above watch our lives
We pray for an angel to hold us up
All through the day and the night
-that sounds awkward
Love & protect us through all weather
We thank you for this clear light
-You should focus less on rhyming, more on flow
12/4/2003 c1 190Miz E. Mak
Short and sweet!... sometimes these are simply the best to write and read alike. Very good job on this one, I like it a lot. Keep writing and God bless.
write on.
190Miz E. MakShort and sweet!... sometimes these are simply the best to write and read alike. Very good job on this one, I like it a lot. Keep writing and God bless.
write on.