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38Papillon Sierra
we that was good... interesting twist and i'm surprised i actually remember the characters.. it's been a long time. well keep up the good work and add some more!
38Papillon Sierrawe that was good... interesting twist and i'm surprised i actually remember the characters.. it's been a long time. well keep up the good work and add some more!
1/1/2005 c14 27MoonWinged-Faerie
An update finally! Well, this is certainly interesting, what's the evil thing known as Andrew doing there I wonder? And what's with the draining spell, Ali is even more screwed, ah! Sorry I'm getting all excited, but I really like this story and the update has made me happy. Update again soon and Happy New Year!
27MoonWinged-FaerieAn update finally! Well, this is certainly interesting, what's the evil thing known as Andrew doing there I wonder? And what's with the draining spell, Ali is even more screwed, ah! Sorry I'm getting all excited, but I really like this story and the update has made me happy. Update again soon and Happy New Year!
8/6/2004 c13 Friend48
As always, I loved the chapter! Especially the part about Luke and his lightning-struck spanish teacher *wink*. For some reason though, and I don't know if this is just on my computer, but on some of the paragraphs the last few words are cut off. The chapter's still understandable though. Hope to read more soon!
As always, I loved the chapter! Especially the part about Luke and his lightning-struck spanish teacher *wink*. For some reason though, and I don't know if this is just on my computer, but on some of the paragraphs the last few words are cut off. The chapter's still understandable though. Hope to read more soon!
7/22/2004 c13 1Wandering Storyspinner
Whee! I enjoyed it a bunch...man...you know, it feels like I haven't talked to you in ages! Anyways...I have a new story...please read and tell me what ya think! Later then!
1Wandering StoryspinnerWhee! I enjoyed it a bunch...man...you know, it feels like I haven't talked to you in ages! Anyways...I have a new story...please read and tell me what ya think! Later then!
7/14/2004 c13 27MoonWinged-Faerie
I'm so glad you finally updated, I thought I'd never be able to continue reading this awesome story of yours! Oh and since I haven't reviewed the past couple times, a happy (very belated) birthday to you! **throws confetti** lol Anyway find some time in that horribly busy life of your's and update this thing! Please, with sugar on top. ^.~
27MoonWinged-FaerieI'm so glad you finally updated, I thought I'd never be able to continue reading this awesome story of yours! Oh and since I haven't reviewed the past couple times, a happy (very belated) birthday to you! **throws confetti** lol Anyway find some time in that horribly busy life of your's and update this thing! Please, with sugar on top. ^.~
4/30/2004 c12 Hioga-chan
Cool! Update again soon, if you can!
Cool! Update again soon, if you can!
4/19/2004 c11 Rae
OH MI GOSH THAT WAS SO COL! I loved it! Of course, I'm typing in navy over black, so I can't read a single word i'm writing, but that is SO beside the point! I'm in love with this story now. YOU MUST GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP! I will bug you relentlesly in your 'leas favorite class', and will never let you get away with not writing again. Bah... so cool...
OH MI GOSH THAT WAS SO COL! I loved it! Of course, I'm typing in navy over black, so I can't read a single word i'm writing, but that is SO beside the point! I'm in love with this story now. YOU MUST GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP! I will bug you relentlesly in your 'leas favorite class', and will never let you get away with not writing again. Bah... so cool...
4/15/2004 c1 1baby-gurl88
hi loser anyways I dont want to take our Lit test tomorrow do you? ugh..I hate school
1baby-gurl88hi loser anyways I dont want to take our Lit test tomorrow do you? ugh..I hate school
3/13/2004 c11 Hioga-chan
About where, eheh, we have no idea exactly where ... it kinda was small an infrequent, and it just caught our eye every once in a while, but it was seriously small.
But cool, getting into the earth thing. We'll be back!
About where, eheh, we have no idea exactly where ... it kinda was small an infrequent, and it just caught our eye every once in a while, but it was seriously small.
But cool, getting into the earth thing. We'll be back!
3/11/2004 c1 Sarah
amazing story, very detailed and funny! I love it - keep updating!
amazing story, very detailed and funny! I love it - keep updating!
3/10/2004 c11 1Wandering Storyspinner
Hey hey hey! Miss me? Man...I thought the greatest birthday gift was my card to you. I'm hurt...anyways...finally updated! Again...awesome...just like the rest of your story. ^^ Keep writing! I'm expecting more brilliance from you! ^^ Later!
1Wandering StoryspinnerHey hey hey! Miss me? Man...I thought the greatest birthday gift was my card to you. I'm hurt...anyways...finally updated! Again...awesome...just like the rest of your story. ^^ Keep writing! I'm expecting more brilliance from you! ^^ Later!
3/10/2004 c11 38Papillon Sierra
happy birthday! and i'm glad you like my reviews... i'm flattered. i absolutely love this story, keep up the good work
38Papillon Sierrahappy birthday! and i'm glad you like my reviews... i'm flattered. i absolutely love this story, keep up the good work
2/27/2004 c10 8Spooky152
:: sings :: You rock, you rock, you rock.
Sorry I haven't been able to review this. I've read it, but just when I was about the click the button for review, I have to go to bed, or I need to do somewhere. Anywho, I like this premise. Arranged marriages...you know what I feel about those ;)!
The only problemI had personally (this is probably because I'm stupid and illiterate) is that it took me a little time to understand the switching of time periods. But, thats because I'm a dunce and your fantasimo, and LA!
:: sings more ::
8Spooky152:: sings :: You rock, you rock, you rock.
Sorry I haven't been able to review this. I've read it, but just when I was about the click the button for review, I have to go to bed, or I need to do somewhere. Anywho, I like this premise. Arranged marriages...you know what I feel about those ;)!
The only problemI had personally (this is probably because I'm stupid and illiterate) is that it took me a little time to understand the switching of time periods. But, thats because I'm a dunce and your fantasimo, and LA!
:: sings more ::