12/3/2003 c1 64not sure yet
hm, the language in this one is just stunning, muchly love it, very beautiful, took my awhile and a couple reads to get the imagery fully into my head, but i like that a lot about poems, the careful wording, esp when you can mess around with different meanings for them cause of it, esp really far fetched ones just to get your brain going, i dunno, that may just be me, anywayz, very beautiful and haunting, extremely well written, just incredible job with this one
ps-as for title..i have no suggestions, none that you could possibly want anywayz..as you probably noticed, a lot of my titles are just the first line of the poem ^.^;;..im so bad with that, but yea, sorry