for Upon Your Mantel12/5/2003 c1 
196Damaged
V_V Such a sad poem ... easy to relate to and, as always, beautifully written! ^_^ This is a great poem! Everything you write is great! Keep it up! I look forward to your next uploading!
196DamagedV_V Such a sad poem ... easy to relate to and, as always, beautifully written! ^_^ This is a great poem! Everything you write is great! Keep it up! I look forward to your next uploading!
12/4/2003 c1 70insert name here
;_; beautifly written, sometimes analogies just get too confusing, but u've managed to make it both clear, without actually writting what it is, a skill few possess, good job
~brendz~
70insert name here;_; beautifly written, sometimes analogies just get too confusing, but u've managed to make it both clear, without actually writting what it is, a skill few possess, good job
~brendz~
12/3/2003 c1 132Sarah Parker
Great imagery... it's very dark, and I like the analogy...it's original and very creatively done. great job. I love that last line... it's so powerful.
132Sarah ParkerGreat imagery... it's very dark, and I like the analogy...it's original and very creatively done. great job. I love that last line... it's so powerful.