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for The Tao of Jacko

2/29/2004 c1 psycho
good one, like mike said, twisted...i love twisted stories...
one thing that is probably irrelevant but still bugged me was that sometimes you referred to Jacko as "he" and other times as "it"...
Jacko knew from the time that ~it~ was split from the Patch that it was doomed to die.
Jacko lay on his side on a cushion of some sort; ~he~ could not be sure.
sorry... that just bugged me for some reason...
but overall, excellent work!
12/4/2003 c1 4LilGrimmy
Twisted, I love it. Excellent work. Cheers!

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