
7/22/2005 c1
72Dark Ink
woah! nice. made me think, n then think some more (which is a rare thing... no wait... lemme think about this one...)! I love it! if you can you should continue it. nicely written. oh so nicely.
~dark ink*don't take life seriously*

woah! nice. made me think, n then think some more (which is a rare thing... no wait... lemme think about this one...)! I love it! if you can you should continue it. nicely written. oh so nicely.
~dark ink*don't take life seriously*
6/25/2005 c1
22Delanie
Why the hell won't you finish this? It is amazing! We need more writers like you! lol
Please e-mail me if possible about why you haven't updated!
-Delanie

Why the hell won't you finish this? It is amazing! We need more writers like you! lol
Please e-mail me if possible about why you haven't updated!
-Delanie
12/14/2004 c1 AaA
Please, continue with the story. There is definately room for more chapters.
Please, continue with the story. There is definately room for more chapters.
12/6/2003 c1
52FAKEromances
oh GOD that's freaky. but also so very good and wellwritten and perfect...and ohmygod its freaky! ahh that's gunna haunt me for a while now...i thought it was just her imagination for part of the time, but i had to go back and reread it and then i caught the bit at the end...about the wrist...AH! *nightmares* but oh yes, good, VERY good!

oh GOD that's freaky. but also so very good and wellwritten and perfect...and ohmygod its freaky! ahh that's gunna haunt me for a while now...i thought it was just her imagination for part of the time, but i had to go back and reread it and then i caught the bit at the end...about the wrist...AH! *nightmares* but oh yes, good, VERY good!
12/5/2003 c1
1FamousOneLiners
This beginning is well written,intriguing and the characters have vivid descriptions
also AFI is amazing and so is silver and cold

This beginning is well written,intriguing and the characters have vivid descriptions
also AFI is amazing and so is silver and cold