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7/14/2004 c1 28Tk.T
Short and sweet, these are the best kind of poems. Great little poem, my only question: Who is Seth? Is this some biblical person?
Happy writing!
Tk.T~
12/31/2003 c1 39Dahlia Wolffe
Shweet! good job. keep it up. Please R/R me, i always return the favor.
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12/20/2003 c1 41Razor Sharp Kisses
This is great. Well written. I like the rhyme scheme and the content. Good.
12/16/2003 c1 15MeiDarkreign
That's really good! Keep it up! Thanks for reviewing mine. I'll try to get the short story finished soon. If you like sci-fi, would you check out my story The Huntress? I've got no reviews and I want to know if that's because it's bad or it just didn't look appealing. And it's not very long.
Thanks.
12/16/2003 c1 7Tomofthepow
Excellence, Sheer Brilliance. Transcendent Masterpiece! Well Done! :)
12/7/2003 c1 32Morbane
Skilful rhyming here. I'm a little puzzled by the Seth reference but otherwise it's all very clear.
'Lies and shattered promises eat
At my body from the feet'
-very nice.
*feign
12/5/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
OK, thanks for the review of "i am such a fool" Its a deal - I won't give up the fight if you don't.
Does "Seth" refer to the myth of Osiris?
My pen name comes from ancient Egyptian Mystical teaching.

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