8/12/2004 c12Jennifer H. Westall As I have already written several times now...wow. I enjoy your writing very much!
12/7/2003 c16Nickety That was beautiful. Word choice could be worked on, but I LOVE the format (how every stanza begins with "She _.") I also like the motifs in this poem. You use the same concrete objects, but change them subtlely with every stanza. Great job. :)