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1/25/2004 c1 117Seras Nova
A very thoughtful and pretty little haiku. Very nice.
(The review you sent me however, will be taken down on account of it had no conncection to my poem.)
Keep writing.
-Seras
1/24/2004 c1 34Nasifah
A young writer friend
Reads an amazing haiku
Yearns for more to come
Great haiku-my interpretation was cherry blossom = innocence, and when it falls away from the young, they miss it. Somehow. Am I off-base? Anyway, this was a beautiful haiku and the imagery is amazing. Thanks for writing!
1/24/2004 c1 IllusionKat
this is a short, but good poem. it has some meaning to it as well. BTW: when you're on a performing rhythmic gymnastics team, and you need 4 routines by April, and you keep on switching coaches, it isn't too good
1/23/2004 c1 27Roxbury88
i don't get your poem "Sakura". i don't get the last lign. what do you mean Yearns for springs gone by?
Try to make it more clear.
1/19/2004 c1 3zjzjzjzjzj
Good work. It's simply a nice poem. A sweet poem.
Hope to see more!
1/16/2004 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
This is a sweet haiku, so refreshing. ^_^
- MH xx
1/16/2004 c1 19Celia Rose
I like it a lot, but the title doesn't match ((unless Sakura means something in Japanese that does relate)). I would cut the periods and commas at the end. Good, though.
I read a review of yours, and I can use some advice... Stop by anytime.
1/12/2004 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Just figured I would return the favor and review your haiku here since you reviewed twenty four of mine.
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This is not a bad haiku, buy any means, but there seems to be something lacking in it...and I am not quite sure what. I think it might be the placement of the commas that throws me off a little bit - you don't need to put a comma at the end of every line...only where you would need one in the sentence (which is nowhere, in this case at least). =)
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Your haiku gives a nice image, though...cherry blossoms are quite pretty.
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But yeah. Those are my two cents - take them or leave them.
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Keep writing.
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~Namir Swiftpaw
1/8/2004 c1 13198685
hola, hehe, i'm not much for haiku's but i do enjoy this one, its very beautiful... i could never figure out the writing... any whoot could you at least gieve me some constructive critisism on Mama's boy? i'd enjoy knowing why you odnt like it... well, toodles
~Vanny
12/6/2003 c1 90SweetGrape
oh- it's pretty! I've never seen a cheery blossom:S so I'll take your word for it. Last line is cool to ponder.
Well-suited title, btw.
12/6/2003 c1 57teh tarik
The last line was really beautiful.
Great work and keep on posting your work up here!
12/5/2003 c1 Princess Chloe
It's cute. The title is really appropriate. The commas aren't placed correctly, though. Other than that, it's really nice. I don't see many haikus here, but it's probably bcoz I'm not looking hard. Even though it's short, it gives an image. Very nice. ~Chloe

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