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1/25/2004 c1 117Seras Nova
A very thoughtful and pretty little haiku. Very nice.
(The review you sent me however, will be taken down on account of it had no conncection to my poem.)
Keep writing.
1/24/2004 c1 34Nasifah
A young writer friend
Reads an amazing haiku
Yearns for more to come
Great haiku-my interpretation was cherry blossom = innocence, and when it falls away from the young, they miss it. Somehow. Am I off-base? Anyway, this was a beautiful haiku and the imagery is amazing. Thanks for writing!
1/24/2004 c1 IllusionKat
this is a short, but good poem. it has some meaning to it as well. BTW: when you're on a performing rhythmic gymnastics team, and you need 4 routines by April, and you keep on switching coaches, it isn't too good
1/23/2004 c1 27Roxbury88
i don't get your poem "Sakura". i don't get the last lign. what do you mean Yearns for springs gone by?
Try to make it more clear.
1/19/2004 c1 3zjzjzjzjzj
Good work. It's simply a nice poem. A sweet poem.
Hope to see more!
1/16/2004 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
This is a sweet haiku, so refreshing. ^_^
- MH xx
1/16/2004 c1 19Celia Rose
I like it a lot, but the title doesn't match ((unless Sakura means something in Japanese that does relate)). I would cut the periods and commas at the end. Good, though.
I read a review of yours, and I can use some advice... Stop by anytime.
1/12/2004 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Just figured I would return the favor and review your haiku here since you reviewed twenty four of mine.
This is not a bad haiku, buy any means, but there seems to be something lacking in it...and I am not quite sure what. I think it might be the placement of the commas that throws me off a little bit - you don't need to put a comma at the end of every line...only where you would need one in the sentence (which is nowhere, in this case at least). =)
Your haiku gives a nice image, though...cherry blossoms are quite pretty.
But yeah. Those are my two cents - take them or leave them.
Keep writing.
~Namir Swiftpaw
1/8/2004 c1 13198685
hola, hehe, i'm not much for haiku's but i do enjoy this one, its very beautiful... i could never figure out the writing... any whoot could you at least gieve me some constructive critisism on Mama's boy? i'd enjoy knowing why you odnt like it... well, toodles
12/6/2003 c1 90SweetGrape
oh- it's pretty! I've never seen a cheery blossom:S so I'll take your word for it. Last line is cool to ponder.
Well-suited title, btw.
12/6/2003 c1 57teh tarik
The last line was really beautiful.
Great work and keep on posting your work up here!
12/5/2003 c1 Princess Chloe
It's cute. The title is really appropriate. The commas aren't placed correctly, though. Other than that, it's really nice. I don't see many haikus here, but it's probably bcoz I'm not looking hard. Even though it's short, it gives an image. Very nice. ~Chloe

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