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1/4/2004 c1 3FinallyFullfilled
wonderful, I love it when the author of anything focuses on just one detail to show something huge. It's kind of hard to pull of, you've done well.
12/7/2003 c1 16amethystdawn
i used to make paperclip bracelets. c", ANyways, nice poetry. Seems to give me the feeling of a mother's point of view. ^_^
P.S Thanks for reviewing my story. I really appreciate it. ^_^
12/6/2003 c1 90SweetGrape
Aww- innocence lost as a child grows up. The verse concerning the paperclip bracelets are cute and sweet and cheerful, while the stanza about real jewellry is very cold. That made it easier to see the contrast between what used to make her happy, and in fact- it doesn't even say that the gold and silver make her happy.

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