for Fairytale, Shaken and Stirred5/2/2004 c1 
79CrimsonCat
You wonder about the word enough:
I love that line. Amazing. I also like the way it seems to be written backwards. the i at the bottom, and iv at the top. The way you write leaves me speachless.
79CrimsonCatYou wonder about the word enough:
I love that line. Amazing. I also like the way it seems to be written backwards. the i at the bottom, and iv at the top. The way you write leaves me speachless.
12/7/2003 c1 AVIGON
A funny thing just happened. I started reading your poem, and when I got to the bottom, I started reading it again, only now in reverse order, up until I reached the top again and went back down a second time. The loop-iness of this poem makes me feel a bit light in the head, I swear.
Another way of saying this would be "I love the arrangement", so let's just go for that last possibility.
The wording's just right (as always), and the you give the story (a story that could be cliché) a nice spin, so that it's "new" and "original".
I like it.
A funny thing just happened. I started reading your poem, and when I got to the bottom, I started reading it again, only now in reverse order, up until I reached the top again and went back down a second time. The loop-iness of this poem makes me feel a bit light in the head, I swear.
Another way of saying this would be "I love the arrangement", so let's just go for that last possibility.
The wording's just right (as always), and the you give the story (a story that could be cliché) a nice spin, so that it's "new" and "original".
I like it.