for Burnt Fantasy3/11/2004 c7 
4Emidot
This story is amazing so far,just chek your capitals,spell check etc. Update soon!
4EmidotThis story is amazing so far,just chek your capitals,spell check etc. Update soon!
3/1/2004 c1 55DueTuesday
dont kill me for constructive criticism! i like the ending a lot but i think the beginning leaves something to be desired it reminds me very much of the stories i used to write in 7th and 8th grade that i have posted on my page. maybe we can help eachother get better?
55DueTuesdaydont kill me for constructive criticism! i like the ending a lot but i think the beginning leaves something to be desired it reminds me very much of the stories i used to write in 7th and 8th grade that i have posted on my page. maybe we can help eachother get better?
1/26/2004 c6 Lily Pierce
I'd advise you to double-check your writing for capitalization, punctuation and so forth before you post it... Otherwise, this story is great! :) It's something all of us have wondered or dreamed about- what it would be like to meet our favorite characters. Maybe you could give a bit more information on each of the book characters (everyone but Cadence), though, so that we'll know some of the things that she knows?
I hope you'll update it soon!
I'd advise you to double-check your writing for capitalization, punctuation and so forth before you post it... Otherwise, this story is great! :) It's something all of us have wondered or dreamed about- what it would be like to meet our favorite characters. Maybe you could give a bit more information on each of the book characters (everyone but Cadence), though, so that we'll know some of the things that she knows?
I hope you'll update it soon!
1/19/2004 c5 1Nikki Jones
OH OH! OH come on you cannot just leave me that way! Rawr! I really like this story, congrats! It's amazing, completely fascinating! Mesmerizing! woo! well i am going to add you to my list. I really hope you update soon! Yay for your story!
1Nikki JonesOH OH! OH come on you cannot just leave me that way! Rawr! I really like this story, congrats! It's amazing, completely fascinating! Mesmerizing! woo! well i am going to add you to my list. I really hope you update soon! Yay for your story!