for Salt Waters4/4/2004 c9 
7TMgirl
Hey! I decided (I think I spelled that wrong) to stop being lazy and actualy read! I love this story so much! It is a great piece of writing, and I didn't find any mistakes! I am happy now! Please update soon!
7TMgirlHey! I decided (I think I spelled that wrong) to stop being lazy and actualy read! I love this story so much! It is a great piece of writing, and I didn't find any mistakes! I am happy now! Please update soon!
3/28/2004 c9 7Liriel87
gah short chapter. But at least you update lol. Well Duff is having his problems. . . but who isnt? Lol. Update soon!
Liriel
7Liriel87gah short chapter. But at least you update lol. Well Duff is having his problems. . . but who isnt? Lol. Update soon!
Liriel
2/21/2004 c2 54Werecat99
So I see you have been busy.
Good chapter, added a lot to Macduff's character.
One note though; you need to make different chapters look as, well, different chapters. This felt more like one chapter cut in half. Nothing major, of course, just something that slightly annoyed me.
And some additional descriptions to the dialog would be nice.
I must commend you for researching before writing this. Your use of naval terms is very good.
Lovely, as always. And thanks for the reviews.
54Werecat99So I see you have been busy.
Good chapter, added a lot to Macduff's character.
One note though; you need to make different chapters look as, well, different chapters. This felt more like one chapter cut in half. Nothing major, of course, just something that slightly annoyed me.
And some additional descriptions to the dialog would be nice.
I must commend you for researching before writing this. Your use of naval terms is very good.
Lovely, as always. And thanks for the reviews.
1/31/2004 c6 Liriel87
macduff can be an annoying little bugger cant he? hmm well thats ok we will just see what the annoying little bugger can do. update soon!
liriel
macduff can be an annoying little bugger cant he? hmm well thats ok we will just see what the annoying little bugger can do. update soon!
liriel
1/31/2004 c1 lux perpetua
This is looking good - sorry I've had to stop reading. (schoolwork beckons.) Your dialogue is well done and description is quite good - though perhaps more imagery would be in order. The sea is very beautiful, as our ships from a distance!
Your MacDuff is a very interesting character - I did get the feeling that he was older in the first chapter, perhaps in his late-twenties. I'm not quite sure how that should be fixed - I'll leave that to your discretion. Maybe in his physical description?
Looking forward to reading more!
~rose
This is looking good - sorry I've had to stop reading. (schoolwork beckons.) Your dialogue is well done and description is quite good - though perhaps more imagery would be in order. The sea is very beautiful, as our ships from a distance!
Your MacDuff is a very interesting character - I did get the feeling that he was older in the first chapter, perhaps in his late-twenties. I'm not quite sure how that should be fixed - I'll leave that to your discretion. Maybe in his physical description?
Looking forward to reading more!
~rose
1/31/2004 c1 2leen02x
do all your irishmen have 'mac' at the beginning of their last names? why dont you throw an O'-whatever in there? anyway, good story...i just need to read the rest of it.
2leen02xdo all your irishmen have 'mac' at the beginning of their last names? why dont you throw an O'-whatever in there? anyway, good story...i just need to read the rest of it.
1/18/2004 c5 7Liriel87
Good story! i like it alot. . . the chapters are soo short though! Maybe you will update real soon to make up for it. . hint hint. Lol. Good chapter and update soon!
Liriel
7Liriel87Good story! i like it alot. . . the chapters are soo short though! Maybe you will update real soon to make up for it. . hint hint. Lol. Good chapter and update soon!
Liriel
1/16/2004 c1 54Werecat99
I liked that. I'm not sure of how magic in a pirate story would work, but so far is blends in nicely.
And I loved your pirate talk.
PS
Thanks for the review.
54Werecat99I liked that. I'm not sure of how magic in a pirate story would work, but so far is blends in nicely.
And I loved your pirate talk.
PS
Thanks for the review.
1/10/2004 c4 2Mad i 17
Once again WOW! This storyline is so great and MacDuff is quite a character. As far as I can tell it is really well written also, with none of the major, annoying, obvios mistakes that no one likes finding. I can't wait to read the next bit of it. Don't leave me hanging too long. Update when you can PLEASE!
2Mad i 17Once again WOW! This storyline is so great and MacDuff is quite a character. As far as I can tell it is really well written also, with none of the major, annoying, obvios mistakes that no one likes finding. I can't wait to read the next bit of it. Don't leave me hanging too long. Update when you can PLEASE!
1/10/2004 c1 Mad i 17
WOW! What a great beginning. I love pirate stories and this one looks like it's going to turn out to be an awesome one. Can't wait to read more.
:)
WOW! What a great beginning. I love pirate stories and this one looks like it's going to turn out to be an awesome one. Can't wait to read more.
:)
1/6/2004 c1 39Hishonami
Just found out that you and TMgirl know eachother. Got to review you know
All the other stories didn't interest me, but this one had a certain ring to it,not to mention the word shall
Some words are not finished all the way, while others have more letters then should,but altogether its a good piece of work
SLy
39HishonamiJust found out that you and TMgirl know eachother. Got to review you know
All the other stories didn't interest me, but this one had a certain ring to it,not to mention the word shall
Some words are not finished all the way, while others have more letters then should,but altogether its a good piece of work
SLy
12/10/2003 c2 3Rothwyn Escarlata
A! Do you know how much I love you already? You're SO going on my favorite authors list...You write fantabulous pieces on piracy (this one), you write medieval things, and you listen to country music! Anyhow, back to the review...I loved it. Good pirate fics are few and far between; this one was awesome. Keep writing!
3Rothwyn EscarlataA! Do you know how much I love you already? You're SO going on my favorite authors list...You write fantabulous pieces on piracy (this one), you write medieval things, and you listen to country music! Anyhow, back to the review...I loved it. Good pirate fics are few and far between; this one was awesome. Keep writing!