
12/8/2003 c1
29Katterree Fengari
As long as you don't think to hard about it, it's always good. Like Insanity is actually just keeping you alive for a host and to mock you...
Btw, lovely imagery, I like the line "With your wild, skillful arms" gives me another chance to say 'mad skills!' today ^_^
nice ending one-word emphasis lines...on the stanzas...

As long as you don't think to hard about it, it's always good. Like Insanity is actually just keeping you alive for a host and to mock you...
Btw, lovely imagery, I like the line "With your wild, skillful arms" gives me another chance to say 'mad skills!' today ^_^
nice ending one-word emphasis lines...on the stanzas...
12/7/2003 c1
56Tessa Celest
I really like this poem, i think its a little wordy, but in good way, dont mind me though, im merely a minamalist who feels that as far as poems the less words needed the better the writer. Its still very cool though.

I really like this poem, i think its a little wordy, but in good way, dont mind me though, im merely a minamalist who feels that as far as poems the less words needed the better the writer. Its still very cool though.