for I cut because6/1/2004 c4 
9Baby Moony
COME ON MAN! please update soon! i wanna kno what her mom does when she freaks out on Karin for bein out so late: anyways update soon!
9Baby MoonyCOME ON MAN! please update soon! i wanna kno what her mom does when she freaks out on Karin for bein out so late: anyways update soon!
3/31/2004 c3 Tom T. Thomson
I have to say, while this story was writen fairly well, there seem to be some issues for me with your main character, Karen. You haven't made it clear why she does what she does. Good story other wise.
I have to say, while this story was writen fairly well, there seem to be some issues for me with your main character, Karen. You haven't made it clear why she does what she does. Good story other wise.
3/14/2004 c2 50Kataerias
Very good job. This is interesting. Intriguing, even. The anger you portray is amazing, and brazenly accurate. You should be very proud of this piece of work.
Great GREAT job. It is fantastic. I will be watching for a further update.
Always,
Krystal (SN: Kataerias)
Oh yes, and thank you for your review.
50KataeriasVery good job. This is interesting. Intriguing, even. The anger you portray is amazing, and brazenly accurate. You should be very proud of this piece of work.
Great GREAT job. It is fantastic. I will be watching for a further update.
Always,
Krystal (SN: Kataerias)
Oh yes, and thank you for your review.
3/13/2004 c2 1Sober-and-Humorless
Intriguing, your writing style is awesome. Please please update soon, you can't leave me hanging now!
-Anne
1Sober-and-HumorlessIntriguing, your writing style is awesome. Please please update soon, you can't leave me hanging now!
-Anne
1/22/2004 c2 Laksha
Awesome story. I like your style of writing. You write about cutting so well, from experience maybe? All the same, I love this story and Mall Goth, please continue on both.
Awesome story. I like your style of writing. You write about cutting so well, from experience maybe? All the same, I love this story and Mall Goth, please continue on both.
12/9/2003 c1 me
hey, this is a good story so far, plz update soon coz yeh
hey, this is a good story so far, plz update soon coz yeh