for Regretful Melancholy1/11/2004 c1 
7maevegirl12
Wow, this is amazing. Extremely well-written and so sad, so bitter. I loved it.
7maevegirl12Wow, this is amazing. Extremely well-written and so sad, so bitter. I loved it.
12/27/2003 c1 7Lightness
sad sad story in a sad sad world. the main guy kinda reminded me of a more sensible gatsby. ya know?
anyway. this was a wonderfully written story. the descriptions were amazingly detailed and realistic. it flowed really really well. and there werent any stupid grammatical mistakes or anything and that is always a plus (seems like a silly little thing to point out but needs to be done anyway. not many people on here seem to know what proof reading is).
anyway. great job. i love your writing style. keep writing. ^_^.
7Lightnesssad sad story in a sad sad world. the main guy kinda reminded me of a more sensible gatsby. ya know?
anyway. this was a wonderfully written story. the descriptions were amazingly detailed and realistic. it flowed really really well. and there werent any stupid grammatical mistakes or anything and that is always a plus (seems like a silly little thing to point out but needs to be done anyway. not many people on here seem to know what proof reading is).
anyway. great job. i love your writing style. keep writing. ^_^.