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for Regretful Melancholy

1/11/2004 c1 7maevegirl12
Wow, this is amazing. Extremely well-written and so sad, so bitter. I loved it.
12/27/2003 c1 7Lightness
sad sad story in a sad sad world. the main guy kinda reminded me of a more sensible gatsby. ya know?
anyway. this was a wonderfully written story. the descriptions were amazingly detailed and realistic. it flowed really really well. and there werent any stupid grammatical mistakes or anything and that is always a plus (seems like a silly little thing to point out but needs to be done anyway. not many people on here seem to know what proof reading is).
anyway. great job. i love your writing style. keep writing. ^_^.
12/25/2003 c1 29aode
this is so good! i swear, I haven't read anything this good in AGES! you have to write more stories. It's so realistic, and i love the way you described Angelina. this is a great short story. congratulations on getting something like this into writing!

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