for Ocean Avenue8/29/2004 c3 
22randomrazberry
hey emi! i love it! it needs some work but its all good! i wish i read it sooner, the titles are brilliantly done and the songs go with the story
22randomrazberryhey emi! i love it! it needs some work but its all good! i wish i read it sooner, the titles are brilliantly done and the songs go with the story
5/22/2004 c1 Emerald Leviney
Wow Emily this is good. I love how you used the song to start off.(Plus I
Wow Emily this is good. I love how you used the song to start off.(Plus I
1/29/2004 c1 1calcolchan
moo, waZZUP DRAKA STICK girl person thingy? this is the chinese voodoo priestess ^_~ sweet
1calcolchanmoo, waZZUP DRAKA STICK girl person thingy? this is the chinese voodoo priestess ^_~ sweet
12/11/2003 c1 Nimeneth
okay... heres whats good... *ticks off things on her fingers* descriptions, showing feelings, letting actions and stuff drive the work, a goth, a popular boy with said goth, etc etc etc. so all in all, very good. i like it.
okay... heres whats good... *ticks off things on her fingers* descriptions, showing feelings, letting actions and stuff drive the work, a goth, a popular boy with said goth, etc etc etc. so all in all, very good. i like it.
12/10/2003 c1 Princess-Meru
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This sounds AMAZING! I hope you continue.
Too lazy to log in...
This sounds AMAZING! I hope you continue.
12/10/2003 c1 Kitsune Ria
CONTINUE! MG. That was awesome. Please continue...I always love your writing...
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Did you read my 'Flame of Youkai'?
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CONTINUE! MG. That was awesome. Please continue...I always love your writing...
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Did you read my 'Flame of Youkai'?
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