for Falling1/3/2004 c1 No Longer Posting Here
You have a unique style of the sentence structures within your poetry. It isn't bad- don't get me wrong- but just very unique. Anyways... it was nicely written. I yet again know what you mean. I've been there in and out for 3 years. Great job in portraying such.
You have a unique style of the sentence structures within your poetry. It isn't bad- don't get me wrong- but just very unique. Anyways... it was nicely written. I yet again know what you mean. I've been there in and out for 3 years. Great job in portraying such.
12/10/2003 c1 
23FearOfClowns
Maybe we _should_ write that book of dark poetry together, l0l. The last line "Fall for me?" should be "Be there?", imho.
23FearOfClownsMaybe we _should_ write that book of dark poetry together, l0l. The last line "Fall for me?" should be "Be there?", imho.