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12/11/2003 c1 6talkingbanana
great "snapshot," as you call it. a ring of truth to it. the internet has become one big way for people to pretend to be someone they're not. virtual reality, if you will.
i like how it ended. the starkness of her lie, going back to "real life" without hesitation. brought the point home.
keep up the good work. :D
12/10/2003 c1 31Baka B.M
A good write, and very truthful, it shows how simple it can be to decieve a stranger, and how simple it is to be taken in by it.
If anything I would suggest making the descriptions clearer, just by spacing them out a bit more.
12/10/2003 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Simple, elegant and exceptional. So much said here between the lines.
Beautifully described, constructed and conceived.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
Check out some of my work if you like.

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