
5/9/2005 c1
4RomanceBabe
WOA WOA WOA! WAIT A SECOND! did u say that u lve in moscow? THAT'S WHERE I'M FROM! well, i wasn't born thee, but i was born in russia!...R U russian? tee-hee, please leave me a review!

WOA WOA WOA! WAIT A SECOND! did u say that u lve in moscow? THAT'S WHERE I'M FROM! well, i wasn't born thee, but i was born in russia!...R U russian? tee-hee, please leave me a review!
11/21/2004 c2
16Eternal Aeris
this is really cool...you need to update it...hey! I updated like rain! please read it! thanx

this is really cool...you need to update it...hey! I updated like rain! please read it! thanx
6/4/2004 c1 Eternal Aeris
I read this story a while ago, but it was before you even read any of my stuff...I really like it...keep up with the good work! Read my poems please!
I read this story a while ago, but it was before you even read any of my stuff...I really like it...keep up with the good work! Read my poems please!
5/6/2004 c2
5ArchDemonNotion
wow, i could just imagine where the people w of aine would end up. you should continue this soon. i thought it kinda funny that the elders would send the younger generation north when the elders lived on the island all their lives. please r&r my story evil laughter. its getting along. i dont know it youll like it though. its a bit dark.

wow, i could just imagine where the people w of aine would end up. you should continue this soon. i thought it kinda funny that the elders would send the younger generation north when the elders lived on the island all their lives. please r&r my story evil laughter. its getting along. i dont know it youll like it though. its a bit dark.
4/13/2004 c1
4Flames and Shadows
SORRY!
begging for forgiveness.
I forgot to review, I am a very bad person. SORRY!
Anyway...
I think that concept is wonderful. Humans damning themselves. Take that us! So they forgot everything about their past? Cool!

SORRY!
begging for forgiveness.
I forgot to review, I am a very bad person. SORRY!
Anyway...
I think that concept is wonderful. Humans damning themselves. Take that us! So they forgot everything about their past? Cool!
3/24/2004 c2
3Taniie
hey! I like this, I'm intrigued about the journey now. Please try to write more soon, it sounds like it's going to be amazing! I like the name: "Elmayra", it's very elegant.

hey! I like this, I'm intrigued about the journey now. Please try to write more soon, it sounds like it's going to be amazing! I like the name: "Elmayra", it's very elegant.
3/11/2004 c2
24goldengirl67
this is a really great story. the only suggestions i have are these: the transition between Elmayra sitting under the tree and her village being swallowed up is a little sudden and unclear, and i don't think that Taliesin should accept his stubbornness so quickly. usually when people are stubborn, they stay that way-you know? other than that, great story. i love your description! keep on writing!

this is a really great story. the only suggestions i have are these: the transition between Elmayra sitting under the tree and her village being swallowed up is a little sudden and unclear, and i don't think that Taliesin should accept his stubbornness so quickly. usually when people are stubborn, they stay that way-you know? other than that, great story. i love your description! keep on writing!
3/10/2004 c2
3Heartless Unknown
OOh,
I like this story too! I have been reading lots of stories by lots of people recently-including Nanaki-Roren's story: Hi no Hikari.
Anyway, you are very good at discribing and such, and I look forward for more chapters-which means-keep it up! I'm lovin' it! ^^
Elmayra is such a cool name, and she seems to be a cool/interesting (likes that word) character-how I love characters! Sorry for this being so long! lata!
~hk~

OOh,
I like this story too! I have been reading lots of stories by lots of people recently-including Nanaki-Roren's story: Hi no Hikari.
Anyway, you are very good at discribing and such, and I look forward for more chapters-which means-keep it up! I'm lovin' it! ^^
Elmayra is such a cool name, and she seems to be a cool/interesting (likes that word) character-how I love characters! Sorry for this being so long! lata!
~hk~
3/9/2004 c2
2DawnKnight
Nice, I like the idea. But after rain should their not be ALOT of mud, since the non-stop rain swallowed land it should still imapct that land that has not come under water.

Nice, I like the idea. But after rain should their not be ALOT of mud, since the non-stop rain swallowed land it should still imapct that land that has not come under water.
2/21/2004 c2
2Shadows of the Mind
Wow! It's good so far.
Yes! It's good!
No! Will! Go away! You give me enough headaches alone, you don't have to give other people them!
Well, if he can't do it, what about the rest of us?
No! Now all of you go back home! Now!
Yes Ma'am..
Sorry about that. They are very anyoying sometimes. Wait no. All the time. Well anyway can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow! It's good so far.
Yes! It's good!
No! Will! Go away! You give me enough headaches alone, you don't have to give other people them!
Well, if he can't do it, what about the rest of us?
No! Now all of you go back home! Now!
Yes Ma'am..
Sorry about that. They are very anyoying sometimes. Wait no. All the time. Well anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
2/21/2004 c2 Katherine
This is a really good story. Your writing style is really creative and I love the prologue. It's very misterious and tells of man's destruction very well. I'm very interested to see where you will take this story. It seems as though anything could happen. I hope you update soon.
This is a really good story. Your writing style is really creative and I love the prologue. It's very misterious and tells of man's destruction very well. I'm very interested to see where you will take this story. It seems as though anything could happen. I hope you update soon.
2/20/2004 c2 Carolyn
WOW! that was really good! It reminds me of Island of the Blue Dophin if you ever read it. I am anxouis to se how it will turn out. Try to use more detail in describing how the scenery was before the storm and the island its self, because at the looks of it we won't know what it'll look like later on because they would have left. Its really good though! I'll R&R more of your work and if you mine!
WOW! that was really good! It reminds me of Island of the Blue Dophin if you ever read it. I am anxouis to se how it will turn out. Try to use more detail in describing how the scenery was before the storm and the island its self, because at the looks of it we won't know what it'll look like later on because they would have left. Its really good though! I'll R&R more of your work and if you mine!
2/4/2004 c2 Angel of Darkness
This is really really good. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. I am intrigued as to what they will find when they travel north...
Remember- build your main character up a lot first, before the story goes plunging into any complex plot. ^_^ Just a little tip. Update soon!
~Angel of Darkness~
This is really really good. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. I am intrigued as to what they will find when they travel north...
Remember- build your main character up a lot first, before the story goes plunging into any complex plot. ^_^ Just a little tip. Update soon!
~Angel of Darkness~
2/2/2004 c2
13LordUltima
This is starting to remind me a great deal of the biblical story of Noah's arc, but the loss of the tree and the raising waters that had always been there give it a new light. As long as this does not end up reading like water world, it will be good.
^_^

This is starting to remind me a great deal of the biblical story of Noah's arc, but the loss of the tree and the raising waters that had always been there give it a new light. As long as this does not end up reading like water world, it will be good.
^_^