2/19/2004 c1 99Myra Kilgore
hey hey ty!...this is great too...you need to enter this into the contest and guess what!...I already have my stuff entered, so I guess i can't enter "I tried"...sorry, but there is always next year. Keep writing!-KS
hey hey ty!...this is great too...you need to enter this into the contest and guess what!...I already have my stuff entered, so I guess i can't enter "I tried"...sorry, but there is always next year. Keep writing!-KS
1/23/2004 c1 21Topaz Waters
So pretty...*Sigh*. There was one thing, the line "Mind not my fingers the brush your hair", did you mean "Mind not the fingers THAT brush your hair?" Other than that, perfect rythm, perfect meter, perfect everything. Beautiful. ^_^
So pretty...*Sigh*. There was one thing, the line "Mind not my fingers the brush your hair", did you mean "Mind not the fingers THAT brush your hair?" Other than that, perfect rythm, perfect meter, perfect everything. Beautiful. ^_^
12/11/2003 c1 14childe of white 19
I am speechless...it's beautiful. I hope you are proud of the image you have painted because it is a masterpeice.
I am speechless...it's beautiful. I hope you are proud of the image you have painted because it is a masterpeice.