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8/18/2005 c2 7gingerbeer
Wow! What a concept! Love how Chapter 1 ended! I'm just a bit confused about the location of the audio recorder that registered a thick gulping sound; is the recorder playing or is he speaking into it, or both?

What authors do you get this amazing narrative atmosphere from?

The text editor ate some of the letters in "resitered," but otherwise, this piece is so well polished!
5/1/2005 c2 35Vestigial Account
Hehehe. I love that. Scientists do need to be cut down to size sometimes.
3/20/2005 c2 5M.P. Solo
I can't believe I never reviewed this. I recall reading it, but oh well.

This is a hilarious spin on the phenomenon of time travel. We all think of it as this amazing thing full of mystery and paradoxes and on and on, but what if it were to be done? How long before it just becomes some mainstream thing? I can bet in this day and age, with the kind of people we have in the world, even time travel could be dismissed as a fad before long.

And then to incorporate it into our daily lives...that's an idea in itself.

Here's hoping your latest wave of creative thought enjoys similar success. Maybe I'll be caught up with everything by then ;)
3/16/2005 c2 31Shadow Gryphon
Ok, that was great. Its true, though. We forget about our heroes so quickly...

Invest in crude oil! ^^

Gryph
3/16/2005 c1 Shadow Gryphon
*blinks*

...

*laughs* Ok, so the title is accurate. That was just a little surprising. I mean, it does seem a little stupid to travel to where you are...

Short and sweet, as they say.

Gryph
2/9/2005 c2 17Tessabe
Ooh, these were funny, great job.
1/14/2005 c1 11The Monolith
Hmm...interesting...

I don't know about the physics here, but it's just a story, anyway.

Getting to the point, this is an excellent albeit very short story, with a surprise ending that would insult most sci-fi writers.(But not me) A very enjoyable read and a whimsical piece of fiction. Good job!
6/17/2004 c1 5M.P. Solo
Ha! I love how everything builds and builds, then slams into a brick wall. Perfect ending. Excellent story!
5/1/2004 c1 BlackxWolfxPrints
hahaha these stories are hilarious! Please, write another! I luv them. Great job :D
4/12/2004 c2 7Paul Ford
The second story on here was hilarious. Good job!
1/19/2004 c1 90The Zaniak
Well...I doubt that reality would cease to exist just because someone broke the law of physics. Just like the justice system wouldn't cease to exist if someone broke a law.
It makes logical sense in my mind.
But I did enjoy this story, and am greatly tempted to write a time travel story that's shorter.
1/15/2004 c1 1Dagnarus
Good story, though time travel back through time is actually impossible. Only time travel forwards is possible.
1/7/2004 c1 A.E. Castleton
It's cute. It was a nice surprise from normal "You failed" or "It worked just right now I have to make people believe me." styles of time travel stories. It also made me laugh which was a great bonus. ^_^
12/27/2003 c1 6i lost my name
That was awsome. You're a frickin' genius. Haha.
12/27/2003 c1 54Werecat99
HA! This was excellent! Short but effective, this story is a little jewel. And I loved every word of it.
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