
12/11/2003 c1
21Shade2
I like this, and the way you state your thoughts. It gives your work an interesting sort of disjointed flowiness. Reminds me oddly of Spirit, though this is much better.

I like this, and the way you state your thoughts. It gives your work an interesting sort of disjointed flowiness. Reminds me oddly of Spirit, though this is much better.
12/11/2003 c1 Chambered emotions
oh my god...that was so beautiful! I love it! You have such a creative, flowing way of writing...it just sounds so beautiful! =) Say hello to Chip for me! Keep writing, for obviously it is one of your talents...
oh my god...that was so beautiful! I love it! You have such a creative, flowing way of writing...it just sounds so beautiful! =) Say hello to Chip for me! Keep writing, for obviously it is one of your talents...