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7/6/2004 c3 4TheNobodyMonster
Thanks for reviewing my essay! By the way, Forgetting Tomorrow was great, you should write more of it!
12/22/2003 c2 The Unbreakable
This reminds me a bit of "Altered States", although there's no real connection between it. Anywho, I'm really interested in how the story will turn out. It has me hooked on how the amnesia will control the story.
12/14/2003 c2 24echoes of chaos
Some grammatical things you need to check on, but I like the way introduced the concept here in this chapter. You may want to credit the William Hazlitt quote. Nice way to end this chapter, all in all, good work, dude. Look forward to seeing where this goes
12/14/2003 c1 echoes of chaos
Well, there's one pastor, one psychiatrist, and one chemist I never want to be under...lol Strong start though, sounds really interesting!
12/13/2003 c2 Kate Connor
WOW! Great story! Also, thanks for the review on my story! I will have the next chapter up in a jiffy! I hope u will have Forgeting tomorrow's chapter up soon! :}
12/12/2003 c1 astro-traveling-angel
I love you style of writing keep it going, and I hope it takes you far as this work deserves to be published well.
Could you please have a look at some of my work and give some reviews thank you
sincerely Maria

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