for Under the Mistletoe12/21/2007 c1 
4i-luv-smoothies
This was such a great story. I really enjoyed reading it and it was just short enough to capture my interest.
4i-luv-smoothiesThis was such a great story. I really enjoyed reading it and it was just short enough to capture my interest.
6/13/2005 c1 9charmed03
aw... what a cute little story! it's definitely every girl's dream on x-mas eve!
9charmed03aw... what a cute little story! it's definitely every girl's dream on x-mas eve!
4/11/2005 c1 15Sahara Hayden
This is a very cute story...I liked it a lot. Maybe you could've made it longer...go in to Ethan and Mary's courtship to further develop the characters...I really liked Ethan's personality though. Overall, a very pleasing story.
15Sahara HaydenThis is a very cute story...I liked it a lot. Maybe you could've made it longer...go in to Ethan and Mary's courtship to further develop the characters...I really liked Ethan's personality though. Overall, a very pleasing story.
1/31/2005 c1 3A.K. Eighth
Oh this was a charming story, and just the right length I might add. The characters were wonderfully written, and I loved the scene where he puts the choker around her neck. Well, just thought you should know how much I enjoyed it! Thanks for the great read- A.K. Eighth
3A.K. EighthOh this was a charming story, and just the right length I might add. The characters were wonderfully written, and I loved the scene where he puts the choker around her neck. Well, just thought you should know how much I enjoyed it! Thanks for the great read- A.K. Eighth
12/18/2004 c1 5Kristen-Roxanne
That was VERY cute... I loved it. But How could she love him at the end? she could barely stand him before... Thats the only fault i see with this plot :P but I LOVED the story on Whole!
5Kristen-RoxanneThat was VERY cute... I loved it. But How could she love him at the end? she could barely stand him before... Thats the only fault i see with this plot :P but I LOVED the story on Whole!
1/31/2004 c1 11Silvestria
Oh what a darling little story! Bellisimo! And it's not even Christmas. Lovely fluff.
11SilvestriaOh what a darling little story! Bellisimo! And it's not even Christmas. Lovely fluff.
12/23/2003 c1 7Liriel87
this was the sweetest little story! i loved it so much! hooray for sweet little stories! rock on!
liriel
7Liriel87this was the sweetest little story! i loved it so much! hooray for sweet little stories! rock on!
liriel
12/14/2003 c1 Em Crosthwaite
This story was really sweet! I'm a hopeless romantic, and this short story wwas filled with warm fuzzies! I loved how Ethan helped Mary with the necklace. He really is a sweet guy!
This story was really sweet! I'm a hopeless romantic, and this short story wwas filled with warm fuzzies! I loved how Ethan helped Mary with the necklace. He really is a sweet guy!
12/13/2003 c1 Veggiehead
Aw, sweet story i enjoyed it:) I look forward to reading your other one! Hm...about your other story...i know obvioiusly that there will be a point in time when Sir Alaric finally gets over his cowardliness...one thing i can think of maybe is on their journey his character is more revealed, perhaps he has a secret hobby that he enjoys..but the readers and Chloe get to know him better...at one point there could be a time of danger when Chloe defends them, but perhaps then there comes a time when she is rendered helpless and he must step in...for a cliché idea perhaps at some point the jousting tournament is placed back on (once the princess is retrieved) so when they come back he enters as a disguised knight and wins, there could be some twists concerning the princess that make it more difficult to retrieve her or once she is retrieved... i don't know...just splurting out ideas that will maybe help you get you back into the story...hope they sort of helped! :)
Aw, sweet story i enjoyed it:) I look forward to reading your other one! Hm...about your other story...i know obvioiusly that there will be a point in time when Sir Alaric finally gets over his cowardliness...one thing i can think of maybe is on their journey his character is more revealed, perhaps he has a secret hobby that he enjoys..but the readers and Chloe get to know him better...at one point there could be a time of danger when Chloe defends them, but perhaps then there comes a time when she is rendered helpless and he must step in...for a cliché idea perhaps at some point the jousting tournament is placed back on (once the princess is retrieved) so when they come back he enters as a disguised knight and wins, there could be some twists concerning the princess that make it more difficult to retrieve her or once she is retrieved... i don't know...just splurting out ideas that will maybe help you get you back into the story...hope they sort of helped! :)
12/13/2003 c1 zagato
This story is so sweet, cute, and absolutely amazing! I like how you put the Biblical tale in this cool story. Ethan asking permission to court Mary - that is so nice. Please write more.
This story is so sweet, cute, and absolutely amazing! I like how you put the Biblical tale in this cool story. Ethan asking permission to court Mary - that is so nice. Please write more.